| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 10:43 CST
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thanks for the early update Sue, great chapter ^^ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll catch up to you yet, Sue! Just finished Purity3, Fantastic, of course. I'll start Purity4 on Monday, as per usual. Hope your having a great vacation! Much love, InU
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Title: Ch. 43
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 11:32 CST
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The long, zigzaggy cross-country road trip is finally coming to an end with New York on the horizon. Will Sydnie finally tell Bas who that other youkai is, or will she try to give him the slip and follow through with her original plan? Bas can see how much this unfinished business is hurting her and only wants to help her find justice for her sister, but first and foremost, to protect her; even if it's from herself. He'd take the burden from her if she'd only tell him, just like she would do anything to keep him from harm. Funny how clear thought goes out the window once the heart is involved.
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Title: Ch. 42
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 10:50 CST
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Whew! Bas...you dog! He sure caught on quick to those helpful suggestions from Kich. -- Poor Sydnie, she's lived with the surety that her vendetta will ultimately end with her death, it's difficult to derail that train of thought and think, let alone hope, for a future. Take a deep breath Bas, and be patient. Maybe once Cain finally talks to her, she'll believe.
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Reviewed By: lila_elensar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 21:11 CST
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I almost never review your stories.. especially since you stopped writing on ff.net. It took me like half an hour to figure out how to review here.. anyway.. back to the point.. I don't review often, but I've read all of your Purity stories. And I love them. I absolutely love them. And I'm sorry that you seem to have so much trouble with reviews from readers who are clearly not happy with some aspect of your writing. You're stories are good, really good. And you don't deserve all the trouble you seem to get. Oh.. and the conversation about balls at the end of JUstification.. hilarious. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 20:58 CST
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Wow, stupid thing wouldn't let me review at school, as usual I am amazed at your plot line and overall talent.Everytime it seems like one problem solved, more just POP up. It's wicked. I am aprticularyly amazed at how you say you are taking a vacation from writin gbut yet chapters still find their way onto the net. I always try to take a break between chapters but I found, you cant stop...you just cant. Its like I dont even remember what I used to do with my free time before I started this. Anyway I love your story, you and your characters but I have one question...The Hanyou's have all at one point talked on the phone, and their EARS are located on top of their head? So Im wondering exactly how you picture them holding the phone?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 10:49 CST
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I was just wondering... Do you have any published works? (If so I know what reading material I'll be buying next... LoL!) InU
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Reviewed By: Red Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 01:03 CST
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I'm excited! I checked the site on a whim and saw the update. I'm glad you updated early! I'm so curious how this one is going to turn out.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 21:30 CST
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lol!! Mistress Sydnie?? that's gonna be some fun pillow talk... ;) and ugh! just when you thought they were out of the woods, there's a crazy widow after them, and sydnie's thinkin about bolting to go kill some other guy... ::sigh:: lol, great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:54 CST
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Aww, poor Sydnie! I hope Bas get's the other youkai's name out of her before she decides to go after him. Hmm...I wonder when Serena is going to pop up with her gun.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I get the feeling that someone one is going to get hurt. Anyway this was an awesome chapter, please keep it going I can hardly wait for the next one!!
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:29 CST
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*sigh* So much unhappiness... I really hope that Bas can keep Sydnie from doing something that could make her situation worse. *fingers crossed*
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Title: :(
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 12:21 CST
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...if youve been updateing sue. i havent gotten them.. im getting frustrated too!!btw im mimiy9991 on DA
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Reviewed By: Hales [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing: I\'ve rated it 10 because I have not yet read a review from someone that hasn\'t enjoyed some or all of your writing. I don\'t believe you have changed your style in any way. Everyone including myself has enjoyed your stories. Spelling and Grammar: I have picked up on a few typos but nothing that can\'t be fixed. The grammer is great. It is easy to understand and your words are easy to relate to. You don\'t use words that aren\'t neccessary to the sentence and you seem to find words that get the message across very well. Originality/Creativity: Well I can\'t be sure who thought up the hanyou/human birth nights but I have a strong feeling that was your idea. I have read many stories from people that have taken that idea and used it. It is very smart. Why shouldn\'t a hanyou have a choice whether to make their offspring suffer as he/she did or to let the child have an easier time as a full human. Not to say it would be easy, just easier. Enjoyment Factor: Well... Lets see. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I can\'t wait for the next book. I think I enjoy it.... A LOT! Overall Rating: :) TEN TEN TEN TEN! I love how your stories come together. You never leave loose ends and you have enough twists and turns that make it impossible to fully predict the outcome. You have an incredible imagination. You also know enough true facts that make the stories believable, like with the pregnancy issues. I didn\'t know about some of those problems. Way to go! Like I said before. I can\'t wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the good work. You know. I\'ve been trying to think of a way you could use your ideas to publish your stories as your own characters and everything but I am finding it impossible. I think it world ruin the story if you had to rewrite it a different way. But you\'ve said before you love these characters and don\'t write with the intention of publishing... At least I think that\'s what you said. I\'m glad you\'re writing. I think you\'re the best writer out there.
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