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Title: oh my god
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just couldn't get any better, well with the exception of beating Jaken senseless. I love how believable this story could be because Sess. is so in character, it's a good evolving that isn't much of a stretch. I love the writing style and everything about this story. I await the next chapter I get so excited when I get a message in my email!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I do not usually read Updated fics, but those that are new. But what you put for the discription sounded really good, so I thought that I would break my rule and just read it. I am sooo happy that I read it.I love the story and want to kill Jaken. Sessy-Sama sound really in character. I feel really bad for rin. The scene with the cherry blossom was so nice. I could just see it in my hear. I think i'm going to cry. The room that Sessy-Sama gave Rin sounds really nice. I wonder what the view is. The necklace sounds really beautiful as well. Your now on my fav. authors list. Can't wait to see what you will write next. Keep up the wonderful work! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 09, 2006 07:48 EDT
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yay! another chapter! *stomps jaken into the floor* and rin is given an offical title! this is very good! ok, i think i put too many exclaimation points in this, so i'll finish it off quickly... please, please, please update again soon! if you do, i'll give you a cookie!
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Title: totally shocked
Reviewed By: Flame's Requiem... Moon Style On: May 09, 2006 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this fic... I'm glad that it became more than a one shot. But, there is one thing... Will Rin be okay? I get the feeling that something within her is about to snap. Either at Jaken, herself, or Lord Sesshomaru. But, Just as I was thinking that, another thought came up. Is Rin going to have maternal concerns? Afterall... A few things were happening here and well... Ah well... I'll keep my eyes open for an update. Flame
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 09, 2006 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD ill say it again, Sess and rin need to communicate more =p Jaken is an ass, update SOON!
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Title: Miss K
Reviewed By: kenpanyoung [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent....please keep updating.
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: May 08, 2006 19:54 EDT
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Right now, I'm wondering if Rin will ever fight back against Jaken. Still, I guess that it isn't possible with her being as so nice and innocent. She's so naive, not knowing what a whore or concubine is, but sometimes ignorant is bliss. Update.
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Title: angelsfalltearfully
Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter just seems to be getting better and better. And yes, I do adore the smuttyness of this fic. And Jaken so deserves what he's getting. But I must say, Sesshoumaru smut is spectacular. You do a great job at it. ^^
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 13:09 EDT
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This story is very good and well thought out.I thought that this might happen, Rin becoming his concubine i mean.She may be a concubine but Rin still has dignity and i hope this story will turn out how i hope.Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: May 08, 2006 09:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bUT ISNT A CONCUBINE PRETTY MUCH A PERSONAL WHORE TYPE OF DEAL ? WONT SHE BE UPSET ABOUT THAT ? OH GOD I HOPE HE DOESNT HAVE OTHER ONES IN THERE TOO ...POOR RIN LOL
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Title: You & your story are so freakin COOL!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 On: May 08, 2006 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this!
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Reviewed By: Ai On: May 07, 2006 22:14 EDT
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aws well i guess i'll just hav 2 keep reading, yeah the sex scene was kinda cut off ubt its allright!
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Title: Lovley
Reviewed By: Miho Momo On: May 07, 2006 20:44 EDT
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I loved that Sesshomaru practically called Rin a whore.I really like Jaken in this fic.For once he's not looking like someones bitch.
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: May 06, 2006 19:56 EDT
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Clearly, the only way to fix the situation between Rin and Jaken is for Sesshoumaru to give him some lovin' as well... (eww please no) I really hope Sesshoumaru is valuing Rin for who she is, not as a sex object. You say you write too many lemons, but I say there weren't enough in the chapter. What does that say about me? ^_^;
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Reviewed By: Kira Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! Very cute. And I'm happy you didnt have Sessy jump straight to making her his mate or anything l;ike other fic writers. This seems more like somthing Sessy would do.
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