| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I hope Sesshomaru heard enough to know what Jaken has been up to (visions of Jaken being booted off of the balcony to somewhere out into the ocean). What an evil little toad! I can't wait for him to get his. I love the character Seta and her care for Rin. I eagerly await your next update to find out what is in store for each of them.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:07 EDT
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Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Seta and Rin and Sesshoumaru's reaction was classic. Keep up the good work...I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 15, 2006 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter!! =D my favourite so far ^^!! update soon!!!
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never liked the idea of a Rin/ Sesshoumaru fic before, but somehow this one grabbed me. You have a good imagination, a dirty mind, and it's also a bonus that you happen to write very well! I love the way you tell about Rin's innocence and confusion at her situation, I love Jaken's cruelty, give me more angst! Sesshy is using her, will she realise that? or will she fall in love? or both? This fic really is entertaining. keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter....ps, you're only my fourth review or so...I only review stories I really like!
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Reviewed By: Rixii On: May 13, 2006 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The creativity part is obviously the weakest point but there's only so many pairings after all. This is the best and only Rin x Sesshomaru fic of such quality, at least that I have read. I think you are doing a great job of keeping them in character. Sesshomaru, though obviously pretty cold originally, is a demon with a very high standing and also much intelligence. It seems realistic that he too would have such feelings underneath unlike other youkai; otherwise he wouldn't have gone through so much work to surpress them. My only annoyance is the amount of space taken up by answers to reviewers at the end.
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Reviewed By: KatGrrrrl99 On: May 13, 2006 15:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!!! Thanks for updating!!! It always upsets me when I'm drawn to someone's story & they abandon it......
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Title: Lovely once more
Reviewed By: Miho Momo On: May 12, 2006 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very glad you explained the difference between a whore and a concubine. Also I'm glad you knew about giesha. How sad it is that most people think they just have sex and dance. Very glad to have and educated author. Yah! I get to read stories about sex and learn. Maybe I can call this sex ed.
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Reviewed By: oz On: May 12, 2006 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed your story. please update soon. oh, and you had some errors, but it was still good.
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: May 12, 2006 03:23 EDT
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I completely agree with what you said in your AN! Besides, who says that people have to be married in order to be in love? Your Sesshoumaru acts like he'd still care for Rin the most even if he gets a youkai wife anyway. Yay for lemons! But my favorite part was when Sess let Rin eat with him. It wasn't sexual but still really intimate (coming from Sess). =^^=
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I must say that I really loved the update. I wanted to say something that I did not before. The way that you transistion from one person to another is so well done that there is no need to do any indicaters unlike some stories I have read in the past. I love that there was not two full blown lemons in this chap. update. I love that there was a build up. The way that you discribed the food was really nice. I ended up making myself dinner before finishing this chap...lol..I must say that like other before i'm really happy that this was not just a one-shot. It turned out to be such a great stroy. The way that you do the lemon is excelletn as well. Not too much discription that it takes soooo long to read it and just enough to give the reader something to imagin. The way the the story is progressing thus far is great. Little by little we see more emotion from Sessy-sama..When I saw that there was an update I rushed though my homework so that I could read your chap. update sooner..Love your writting style and I want to say that I still think that Jaken should die..oh yes I'm very happy that you saw that I was not trying to bash you with the ratings last time and that I was just being honst..I love how you putt something each time for each person at the end of each chap...^-^
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 11, 2006 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story. Its so original from all the Rin/Sess stories I read.Please keep up the great work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: May 11, 2006 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Another great chappie! Please keep up the good work. I enjoy reading your stories. Thankies. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Syory!!! Can't Wait For U To Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 11, 2006 19:45 EDT
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good! i loved the bath scene.... every story, be it fan fic or original, should have at least one of them. i don't like the peanut butter kind either, so i'll give you one of the chocolate chip ones that my sister just finished making! please, please update again soon! i really like your style and your writings!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up I Want to see what will happen next.
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