| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOHHH AAAHHH THAT WAS AMAZINGS!! I WANTS MORE HE! R THERE GONNA BE ANY MORE "ROMANTIC" SCENES ANY TIME SOON!?!
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: April 22, 2006 00:39 EDT
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poor rin... i get night terrors alot so i can sympathize with the nightmares. i hope she reallizes that sesshoumaru isn't really disappointed in her, that it's just jaken being a jerk-faced asshole.
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Reviewed By: cryptic91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 21:42 EDT
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I love this story! It's so much different from the others but I'm hooked none the less. Please Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: April 21, 2006 03:07 EDT
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Actually I was kidding on my last review (as in, Jaken lusting after Sess) but I agree completely with what you said. Poor guy. Once again, I love Sess's characterization in this. He always struck me as someone who shows his feelings with action, not words. Let's hope Rin can win respect from him so he won't trod on her like a doormat.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 00:44 EDT
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Yes, a wonderful ass kicking is in order! *rubs hands together conspiratorally*
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Reviewed By: essies2 On: April 20, 2006 23:14 EDT
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lovely as ever can't wait till you update
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that Rin is thinking about her status and how she belongs. Jaken as a smug, jealous bastard is also quite in character although in some episodes of the anime, he does actually appear to care. Here Jaken is more concerned with amusing himself at Rin's expense, rather than helping her cope with the changes in her life. Great story. Will Sesshomeru discover he has more feelings for Rin? Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: April 19, 2006 22:30 EDT
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gaw! i hate jaken! *picks up his staff of heads and clubs him with it* poor rin! please, please, please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:58 EDT
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What an evil Jaken, evil! Tch please let him have his just rewards, I want to hit him.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:23 EDT
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Aww, poor Rin-chan! That makes me want to feel all sad for her... I hope Sesshoumaru hears what that little asshole said and beats that stupid little prick to a bloody pulp! Grr!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 05:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! i mean WOW! I really like the way you describe the chars they seem just the way they're supposed to be. It's not like some authors that just use the frases from the anime and think that they've done all the char. No! you caught the spirit of each that's why this story i soo awesome! I'd put you all 10s but it's just that Rin/Sess is not all that original... although it's the best i've read so far so.. Anyway i really hope you would update soon.
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Reviewed By: Youkerie On: April 15, 2006 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;______; update update update< please ^^- gj so far- really like it...if you update > > yes update and your fic will be good < < no update your fic will be bad XD lol jkjk< but i would really like you to update quickly ^.^ tho i must admit< rin is a 'lil' to innocent for my liking< but its your fic ^__^
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: April 15, 2006 17:08 EDT
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What a spiteful little demon. Could it be that Jaken is... jealous?! ^_^
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Reviewed By: essies2 On: April 14, 2006 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh jaken need his ass kick i mean damn is trying to get killed or something. Cause won't sesshomaru find out about what he said.
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: April 14, 2006 16:19 EDT
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Please update soon.
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