| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: kenpanyoung [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pls update soon. Sesshomaru and Rin is really in character. Will she finally understand that he is really using her or isn't he???? Jaken is such a smug bastard sometimes!!
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: April 11, 2006 02:17 EDT
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Your characterization of Sess is great! I like how he tried to justify his desire for Rin by reasoning that she had to contribute somehow. It's unrealistic to expect him to transform into a care-bear right after having sex with Rin (or anything else for that matter) so, although I want Rin to know that sex can be pleasurable and for Sesshoumaru to feel something more than just lust for her, I really appreciate how in-character these guys are. Please continue.
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Title: No_Bodys_Baka
Reviewed By: No_Bodys_Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 01:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is interesting. Good, but interesting.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: essies2 On: April 09, 2006 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow bad new for Rin are is it?? please update soon.
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Reviewed By: essies On: April 09, 2006 21:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow bad new for Rin are is it?? please update soon
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: April 08, 2006 19:20 EDT
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actually... this is probably the exact way it would happen... they're so incredibly in character it isn't even funny. interesting. nice job. i'm assuming she stays?
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - quite the fic - you write sex scenes so well, with feeling and a story. An excellent story.
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Title: essie
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 21:32 EST
Comment/Review:
man this is great
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 02:26 EST
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You think like I do...I wrote a fic where Sesshoumaru did it with her, only he was trying to get her pregnant and succeeded. You'd have to read my fic The Last Day to see why. THe writing here is excellent and you got their characterization pretty good. I do hope there will be more :)
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was good. i hope you update.
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Reviewed By: Empress Night Star On: February 10, 2006 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic! Keep it as a one shot. I have to admit some of it was funny. (I mean it in a good way.) If you ever do the morning after please send it to me at gwenstefani213@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 06:15 EST
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It was messed up in the cutest way possible. Really! I liked it a whole lot. Maybe you should do a second chapter to it, just to see how she would react getting pleasure from it instead of pain! I'd really love that.
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