| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: Great! On: May 11, 2006 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really great! please update soon. For jaken I RELLI want him to get told off by Rin, he's such a jerk!! And for Sess and Rin I'm so glad Rin's getting more spunk keep it coming! I love it:)
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first began reading your story, I really hadn't planned to stick with it (no offense meant or anything, it had nothing to do with your story, just the fact that I wasn't in the mood to get involved in another story, let alone one that was unfinished) but now I'm really glad I stuck around. I am really enjoying it! :D seriousley can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: May 11, 2006 11:38 EDT
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Great chapter. I can tell from this chapter that Rin's getting more confident in her actions. Also, it seems Sess is showing more "emotion" towards Rin. Hope that maybe there's a chance that she'll beat up Jaken verbally or physically, but both would be nice... geez I gotta stop enjoying violence.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 11, 2006 10:08 EDT
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*blushes and squeaks* Thank you for coming to check out my story! I swear I turned bright red when you did, I was so flattered! Thanks so much! *bow bow*
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 09:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i'm glad rin is strating to understand and she should be very happy with her positions because of the circumstances of long ago life.Please write more soon and please hit Jaken in the story once or twice for me.Thanxs.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 03:14 EDT
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Very exciting, very hot. I'm so happy for them, and that play scene was too cute for words! I'm so happy! It is truly adorable, and I love it! Keep it up
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Reviewed By: Puddle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 02:02 EDT
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Yes, I do get excited. This story is just so wonderful! I especially liked this update. This might be my favorite chapter so far, what with Rin's womanly instincts and Sess' little tricks. I also love how sweet he is to her. Its out of character, and yet so in character its scary. Are you in league with Rumiko Takahashi? Do you read her mind? Ah well, another thing we can add to your list of awesomeness. *worships*
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 01:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most definetly I love your writing style, you are very talented. Lots of people can write smut and a story, not many pull it off well. Your writing skills are spectacular I must say. But I do enjoy the smut though, not going to lie about that. But I do love your writing in general. So whoohoo. I loved this chapter!
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Title: You are my favorite writer
Reviewed By: MikkieS34 On: May 11, 2006 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More Sess and Rin goodness thank you! my big sister Nikkie23534 made me read your story and agrees with me in saying that you are becoming one of our fav. writers!
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Reviewed By: nikkie23534 On: May 11, 2006 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm melting!!!!!Muat write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 00:07 EDT
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That was a great chapter! I loved seeing Rin take more action...and Sesshoumaru is losing-up some-yet he's still in character so job well done on that!! And even though I love reading stories with really long chapters, after starting my own fanfic...I have no idea how those people do it and update in less than a month let alone sometimes every week!! So kudos to you for giving us just enough each chapter and still updating regularly. =)
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Reviewed By: South American Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 22:50 EDT
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This is pretty good. I'm very impressed also by the frequency in your updates... very impressed...lol... well I wish you luck on this story (wishing for now writers block)and anything else you may do! Bye
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great!!! Most enjoyable. Update soon - looking forward to Jaken's downfall and more of Rin and Sesshomeru. WOW!
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Reviewed By: Ai On: May 10, 2006 21:55 EDT
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ohs that was hot XD, yes. wat other hot place will they hav it now and jaken needs to like die!
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: May 10, 2006 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooooooo delicious (licks lips) i wish i had that much fun :)
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