| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hello Dere On: May 27, 2012 15:11 EDT
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I'm not sure what you did but after reading through the one chapter available, I knew I'd read this story before and had missed several chapters. I've gone back and tried to get the other chapter but it seems like when you updated chapter 11, you deleted or hid the other ten chapters. I can find the first two chapters on FF.Net as you are uploading them there... Really want to read this story again completely though so could you look back at what you did or upload the other chapters again? Something went wrong and they've disappeared from MM.org :( |
Reviewed By: Pumpkinpi82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 21:49 EST
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I normally think of Sesshoumaru relationship with Rin as more of a father daughter relationship, but this story was excellent!!! I love Rin naive and innocent outlook on life. I also loved how her experience with Sesshoumaru, terrible run ins with Jaken and her advice from Shea turned her into a mature lovely yet still innocent young woman. I look forward to reading more of your work:-)
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 04:01 EDT
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I still think that you should have disemboweld Jaken. Seriously.But the rest is great!
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Reviewed By: Fawks-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 15:57 EDT
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE CONQUERS ALL!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE CONQUERS ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kashudoreineko On: August 11, 2007 21:06 EDT
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This was absolutely lovely! I am THRILLED with the ending. You handled the shame that I agree would be highly likely with aplomb. I love the dispatching of Jaken. I love the mosaic. Such fascinating ideas. Such a nice display.
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Reviewed By: Tara L.R. On: August 11, 2007 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! I particularly loved the punishment of Jaken. Never liked the stupid toad in the first place. Always seemed too happy with evil for me. Anyways, what else can I say, the wording was awesome, the lemons were vivid, and the dialogue was witty. Keep writing, you have excellent potenial! (Watch out, though, you had a few small spelling errors that I noticed!)
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Reviewed By: Fawks-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 22:25 EDT
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I thought PWP meant 'Plot What Plot?' ... ... ... I'm confused....
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 14:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent piece. Yet another reason you are one of my favorite authors. I read Cursed before I read this one and I must say I enjoyed both very much. You can see very clearly how you have improved in style and finesse.
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 17:02 EST
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i loved your fanfic its on a whole different level for fanfics it is a story of its own and i loved every page of it!!! sends writing vibes for more great fanfics ;p
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Reviewed By: person11 On: August 15, 2006 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Love Sess/Rin, hate Jaken:P Very Good Story
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Title: you MUST do an epilouge..PLEASEEEEE....
Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 16:18 EDT
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okay, for starting out with no intended plotline, I have to hand it to ya, That was one HELL of a story!!!!!! with that being said I have only two words for ya.... ENCORE, ENCORE!!!
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Reviewed By: just passing through On: June 09, 2006 18:31 EDT
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I was wondering will you ever do a Kagome and sess???????? i think it would be a master piece if created by you.
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Reviewed By: Lori On: June 05, 2006 12:43 EDT
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Sorry to review again, but I looked for your other stories (you plugged a Sess turned human at the end of this) and didn't find them on mm. Was it a glitch or have you taken them down? nelsonbannaba@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Lori On: June 05, 2006 12:38 EDT
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I couldn't wait to finish this - it was so much fun. I enjoyed your cold and methodical Sesshoumaru vs. Rin's warmth. And thanks for the hot and kinky lemons. :) You pulled off 'evil, jealous Jaken' well. Liked your original touches (mosaic, mating ceremony, OC..) as well as the characterizations.
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Reviewed By: Lori On: June 05, 2006 01:27 EDT
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wow, that was hot! It flowed well and I can see your point that it may have gone like that - the only thing I thought was 'off' was the fact that Rin didn't know the difference b/t male and female - every village girl past the age of one has seen and understands what a penis is. Enjoyed it.
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