| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: graybear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoughouly enjoyed this fic. athough I prefer a more detailed expression on lovemaking, you have done very well. your descriptions of sess's and rin's attitudes towards one antother were exemplary. and the surprising twist of Jaken's betrayel was superb. fell free to read my story in love Hina and review. the title is family ties.
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Reviewed By: Nahau On: May 30, 2006 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, it was awesome. Hopefully you will decide to make a sequel. Most people have Sesshoumaru mate Rin. I loved how you were original and made her a concubine. Because that's what he would most likely do. Thank you so much for sharing your fic, I hope tp see more of your writing.
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Reviewed By: kenpanyoung1 On: May 29, 2006 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Say it not so!!! I can not believe that you ended this story. I still crave for more! There's still unresolved issues with Rin and Sess. Since this story is finished, will you write another Rin/Sess fanfiction? Because of you, I have avoided my boyfriend and schoolwork for over a month, you owe me another fanfiction!!!What a ride....
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Reviewed By: Miztikal-Dragon (not logged in) On: May 28, 2006 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't know how happy it makes me knowing that someone else is straying away from the cliche Rin/Sesshomaru stories! Yeah people don't like them as much but who cares I'll follow! It doesn't matter if not as many people read it, but how much the one's who do love it. Angst is awesome! I heart you mucho mucho! This was a great story! KYAAAAH! lol -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: Chic On: May 28, 2006 02:28 EDT
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I did love the final update and thanks! Great Job on the last chap I LOVED it. AWESOME fic and I hope you write some new ones soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Puddle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:32 EDT
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Mon fastique! *claps* A wonderful ending. Its alright that you didn't end it with some sappy confession of love. You still kept it in character as best you could, and I actually liked this ending better. While weddings with confessions of love and happy marriages make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, they aren't as fulfilling as an ending like this. So be proud, its a good story! And you don't have to give the readers what they want. After all, it is your story. Just keep writing, because you're awesome. ^^
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 21:11 EDT
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oooh noooo! *cries* that's the end?? how sad, I was hoping it would go on for much longer. *sighs* oh well, it was good while it lasted! thanks fo the excellent story! :)
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 27, 2006 07:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done^^ a great ending, the story feel complete =) im SO glad you didnt drag it on and make one of them die or somthing i hate it when authors do that xD
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 04:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was one of the best fics i've ever read! I mean it! You chose a common topic but you've managed to do it better that anyone. All the chars kept their personality, the descriptions were amazing, the feelings so very well described! You finished the story right where it had to end... I bow and take my hat off... I really can't wait for new stories of yours. I hopr that you had the same fun wrighting it as i did reading it! Cheers!!
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: May 27, 2006 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I guess that I kind of knew that the story was getting to a closing. Oh well, it's been a great fic. Hope you continue to write more fics.
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: May 26, 2006 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm sad that there isn't going to be a sequel but still, the final chapter was lovely. Heh, I just *know* Sess is going to be whipped. :)
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: May 26, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
( stand and cheers) this is great i really really love story you are the greatest
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now THAT was entertainment! Thanks for the HOT ending!
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Title: Nice ending!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice way to wrap everything up. Rin finally understands her place and they each have what they wanted and needed.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 26, 2006 18:05 EDT
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Amazing! *applaude* Bravo! I'm so happy! Bravo, Bravo!! w00t! So wondeful!!
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