| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: May 20, 2006 18:21 EDT
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So Sess actually thanked someone...interesting. It's true that Rin understands her status, but doubt always seems to linger for a very long time. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Puddle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 16:56 EDT
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Another excellent update! I think they just keep getting better and better. Its good that Rin finally knows what a whore is, but its frustrating that she can't understand that she is very important. But I guess being raised the way she was and with everything thats happened to her, it understandable. And does Sess know that Jaken was messing with Rin's mind? I hope so. Jaken needs a good ass kicking.
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Title: You are a genious!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MikkieS34 and I both think you are a genious! We sooooooooooooo LOVE your story and we can't wait for your next chapter! Please keep up the HOTNESS!! Again we twins think you ROCK You do Sess and Rin justice! Oh, Mikki thinks you should thrash Jaken more(Please forgive my sister is the sicker of us 2). Extreme HOTNESS~Thank you for sharing this story with us!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 19, 2006 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im loving this still ^^ always waiting for the next update, my only complaint is the length of the chapters. as long as you make up for it and update them faster then we have a deal xD keep on with the good work!! *cant wait till jaken gets a beating*
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: May 19, 2006 04:56 EDT
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I'm honored that my review made you happy! ^_^ I'm a total fan of Seta now. She's just what Rin needed and I liked how she pointed out that Sess cared for Rin, just for being herself, even before they had sex. Seta was being really wise when she reflected that Rin's trust issues won't go away just like that, too. But I have to say that it's pretty harsh of Sess to deny Rin children. True, women don't need to have kids to be happy (of course!) but it's still a pretty strong urge, you know?
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 04:22 EDT
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*sweatdrop* I...was going through your reviews randomly, and reading them... you've got a fanclub? Wow. That's amazing. You know your fic is popular when 1)Your reviews are like a forum where people chat back and forth to one another and make fanclubs for you. *looks around innocently* I JOIN TOO! *worship* Lol, j/k. But that's seriously pretty awesome
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 04:15 EDT
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*gives you that squeal I promised* Happy? I'm more than happy. I ecstatic. Now maybe since Sesshomaru heard some of what was going on, he'll put that slimy little asshole in place. *growls* Under his foot! That bakemono. Little baka... jerk...meanie... *grumble mutter mutter* Anyway! Yes, hot vote for you! Hoorah!
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Reviewed By: Rixii On: May 19, 2006 01:24 EDT
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lmao the last reviewers "add" is hilarious. And, I guess I didn't want you to think that I don't like the reviewer responses. I'm glad you take the time to respond to your readers, it makes it more fun to read your stories because I enjoy them. What I should have said maybe was that the chapter was a little short... *shrug* Anyway, I love this last chapter. Sesshomaru's actions with Seta at the end, definitely in character with how he handled it. Good job. It's great to see Rin getting some answers finally! ^_^
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: May 18, 2006 23:48 EDT
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her one slap that can change the whole world. Seta... buy her today So Jaken can pay!!! limited time offer :)
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 22:41 EDT
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arg! what a miserable little...toad! (oh, wait that's literal as well...)I can't wait for seshomaru to find out what Jaken has been saying. but I also hope that before he slowly and painfully destroys jaken, that Rin gets the courage and a chance to stand up for herself against his insults. I'm really enjoying your story, and can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:46 EDT
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YAY NEW CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!! i want to castrate that little jaken!!! Grrrrr...he deserves a worm. and maybe a frozen pice of meat....yeah...then let him rot in a cave...mwahahaha! Hates jaken.. luves rin/sessy:P
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Title: holy sh*t
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pardon my language but I'm just so excited you updated! I had my fingers crossed when I saw that I had new mail and IT WAS YOU! Awesome, loved the story, so glad that someone else is talking to rin about things now instead of that toad....*glares at Jaken*... I hope he gets his. Keep'em coming.
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: May 18, 2006 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww. Poor Rin. But thank goodness that Sessy now knows what is troubling Rin. Good work and write more please!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 18, 2006 17:30 EDT
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Great chapter as always. I wonder how Rin is going to handle her new role. Is she able to accept it? Will she turn away from all that she know in order to gain some of her dignity? Will Jaken get punished for his transgression? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adored this chapter, smut or not. lol. I can't wait for Jaken to be punted out the window, or thrown on the train tracks..oh yeah not in this time huh...well damn. ^^ I love your writing, I SO love it. I get so excited when I get a notification of your story in my inbox. Yay!
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