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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely still got it. Not sure if you remember me or not, but I was a big fan of the series when you were originally putting it up. It's still great, and I just read the whole thing through (again) in one sitting (only an hour and a half). It is still a favorite. I was just wondering if Chapter One was only supposed to be a Disclaimer? Because that is all that is there at the moment. I also noticed that several of the footnotes in several chapters had been cut off, often in mid-sentence. But it is still a great and original story, and I hope you will be putting more up soon.
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 15:53 EDT
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Please, not the overly-protective sister routine wherein Nabiki declares eternal vengeance against Ranma for daring to harm Akane in any way...irregardless of how often her family, and Akane in particular, had harmed Ranma. This is one of the most overused, and baseless, cliches in all of Ranma fanfiction.
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Title: Chapter Five
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 09:26 EDT
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If this is post-Saffron, Ranma's hair is no longer affected by the Dragon Whisker Soup. Although, it could have left traces of its power in his aura.
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 09:14 EDT
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Is Ranma in ill health? Climbing the stairs should not have been any kind of problem for him at all.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even after all this time, the story is still awesome. Thank you for writing this superior fanfic. I also thank your demons of inspiration. *bows* Domo Arigato.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 23:14 EST
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Hmmm, the tale is a good one, and an amusing as well as mature storyline, combining the two most well known creations of Takahaishi-san's. Plus, Ranma gets a woman, not a girl, and finds his own true maturity, instead of remaining as a child as he was in so much of the manga. In truth, this is one of the few truly great storyline's I have had the pleasure of reading as of late, and wish to continue to peruse your work. I'll look what else you've written up sometime. Anyway, glad to see this story turned out so well. ANd while it is over a year since the story came out, I am glad I got a chance to read this. Good luck with your other projects, and hopefully they turn out as well, if not better, than this one. Saiyonara, Graypheonix
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Reviewed By: Nubnuts On: January 02, 2007 07:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Is Kagome and Ranma child gonna be human or hanyu?
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 01:38 EST
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I enjoyed your story greatly. It seems natural to do a crossover between Inuyasha and Ranma 1/2, and yet I have read very few decent fanfics that utilize their complimentary features well. My one problem with this story, which is really just a personal issue, is that I feel that Ranma would not have forsaken his life as easily as he did in this story. I would have liked to have seen more concern over choosing between Akane and Kagome, especially considering their similarities (they are actually both very violent if you think about it). However, as the story stands, it is very well done. Please continue to write.
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Title: Sealed Past
Reviewed By: Crazed One On: August 08, 2006 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always wanted to read a Inuyasha Ranma 1/2crossover! Thanks for writing such a good fic!
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Title: *Cringe*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 02:59 EDT
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I want to flame this I really really do. I want to be mean and hatefull, and it just might already be hatefull even say that I want to flame this but I can't help how I feel. I stopped reading after the claws to the face thing with Akane and Ranma. Ranma would never do that, and neither would Inuyasha. It's so out of character that I could cry, but instead I'll stop reading this and leave you with a suggestion. Read/watch the manga or anime for both series and get inspired by the canon personalities of the characters.
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: May 24, 2006 08:01 EDT
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ahhh... me again. i have to give you my apologies for taking so long to review because my computer for some reason did not show me that you have updated until now even though i have tried to check every now and then. *sighs* oh yes... now that i found out what your ff.net account is i have to review it on there too when i have time. ah yes and also to leave my account link for you ^^. i have to congratulate you on how you put together and ended the story so OMEDETOU! obviously your story is quite original and i havent read one with anything like it really. you have made the character seem more in depth and perhaps more knowledgable than in the original mangas. ive had a fun time reading and waiting for your updates and hope to do so again. good luck with your other stories
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Reviewed By: Morita Ayumi On: May 21, 2006 22:08 EDT
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I liked the story in general, but it was kind of hard to follow with the who-was-who stuff sometimes. One time, I got Sessomaru(sp? Forgive me! >.< I forgot how to spell his name) confused with Kagome's granfather.. I forgot how, but I did...
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 10:17 EDT
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:tear: it's over... good ending, great story... contemplating a sequal???
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Title: All Good Things....
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**takes deep breath** I enjoyed this story so much - though by now I think you know that. **big grin** The ending was very characteristic of Ranma/Inuyasha (I really enjoyed the disavowal of the Crew, by the way) and Kagome. And the idea of changing the trigger for the curse to the rosaries was a stroke of genius. **chuckles** How Takahashi-esque! I plan to read the revised version once 2.0 comes out, of course. I just wanted to say that this was a wonderful fic, and you are a really good writer. I have both this fic, and you as an author in my favorites, and I look forward to many more works by you. Gambatte ne in all you do!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 14:36 EDT
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GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I encourage you to keep writing and most definitley to work on your grammar... not that it is a major issue its just people tend to understand the story more if you use correct english.Look forward to seeing your next fanfic. Kisses bye!!!
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