| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Title: a.k.a kirarasatsuke
Reviewed By: kirakasuke On: October 04, 2006 21:14 CDT
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okay.can anyone say THE FAST AND THE FURIOUS!! thats so totally what i thought when i first read this!! i completely recommended it to my friends!, it was so cool! they couldnt wait to read it.but then...I COUDNT FIND IT!!but now i have and whats better? you updated!!!pleeeeeeaze update soon!
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Reviewed By: kirarasatsuke On: October 04, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a great fic. Keep up the good work! Your idea is so original. It's such an inspiration to lowly beginners.*gets great big puppy dog eyes as tears gather*. YOU MAKE ME WANT WRITE!!!!(wich is saying something)
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Reviewed By: Crane On: September 26, 2006 03:39 CDT
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Woohoo!! You updated!! That's great. I was just wondering if you were going to put in any more of Kagome's aiming abilities in the story. I think it's cool. :) And YAY for lemon! Keep up the good work!!
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Title: future author
Reviewed By: tiffani On: September 23, 2006 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when i discovered you had updated. I had been waiting for it for some time now. I am officially content untill the next chapter comes out. It sucks Yash got hurt by that explosion(sniffles). Glad everyon is okay. i wonder what the fangs enemies have up for them next. I definately can't wait to see how Kagome becomes a WildCat nor what happens when they find out that Gan is a girl. Anyways, excellent chapter as always. Update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: poop-head On: September 23, 2006 12:19 CDT
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love your story can't wait for the next chapter:D
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 21:33 CDT
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good chap again. I understand your being busy, me too. I'm tryin to start a fic, but life keeps getting in the way... say yay for the lemmon! PS: like last time, try to do more Inu/Kag?
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 20:15 CDT
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i LOVE!!!! this story. it is so awesome. you just have to remember to update it more. tnxs for writing it. Oh, one more thing, did you get the race wars idea from THE FAST AND THE FURIOUS?
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Reviewed By: inu4kagome25 On: September 18, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh im SO glad u Finally updated ive been waiting for ever i love this story it is one of my favorites right now i hope u update again soon
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Reviewed By: silverflamingkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 12:44 CDT
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i like this story. but i have a guestion, do any of the others know about kagomes ability to use a gun or are they keeping it a secret for later? well, can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 19:46 CDT
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yes! nice chapter. i have been waiting anxiously for this and i'm really satisfied. i know with all the school and stuff you get sidetracked. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. And I can understand why you took so long , all author are. 'Cause of school and that other crap we have to wait longer, but I'm a waiter so long as thing come along. Well I hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: liza On: September 04, 2006 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon, good luck wit school i know the feelin, im startin in like 2days or so. hope u enjoy writtin the next chapter :) a faithful reader, liza moongirl110@msn.com
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 18:50 CDT
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Finally they got together. I thought they were never going to get togerther. It's kinda sad the event that brought them together thou. And Kagome went bad on Kagrua. They know not to mess with her anymore. What is Naraku planning to do with Kagome.
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Reviewed By: er On: August 30, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic can you please finish this stroy its soooooooooooo good i cant wait for the next chapters!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 12:15 CDT
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yeah i can relate to all that stuff its gonna be the same for me well cept for the SAT thing.
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