| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: Halfling Miko On: July 31, 2006 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good chapter. inuyasha and kagome are finally together! and i think that they are making a good choice to accept akago into the south hes a good leader. i cant believ that no one relizes that gan the gun is a woman. doesnt her voice soud slightly feminine? well update soon because this story is hot on my list. XD XD XD XD XD!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:49 CDT
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P.S thank god Inuyasha and Kagome is together !
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man if you think this is a boring chapter you are mistaken! It was good. But there is one thing that is bothering me. Why can't they sence that Gan the Gun is a woman? Well I'm glad that the leader of the Sharks is joining with the South, its good for them that they did. They're not fit to the North. Well hope you update soon and keep it up will you.
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Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: Halfling Miko On: July 27, 2006 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i just discovered it today. i love your original characters and i like the whole gang concept of the story. i hope you update soon because i can't wait until the next chapter! i wanna see if someone finds out that gan the gun is a girl and if kagome and inuyasha or shitora and ranbou FINALLY get together. i love all your pairings but inuyasha and kagome are my absoulute favorite with shitora and ranbou close behind so pleaseeeee continue! XD! ooh and i also want to find out when the other gang members especially the boys who dont like the girls to do anything dangerous figure out that kagome knows how to use a gun and did! that would be a good chapter to read! update soon! XD XD XD!
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Title: mygosh!
Reviewed By: great! On: July 26, 2006 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my gosh that was such a twist i never saw it coming! i mean gan the gun is a girl!!! i cant wait until the next chapter. and i like where your going with the pairings could you try to put a little more inuyasha and kagome in there thanx!
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Title: woo hoo!
Reviewed By: woo hoo! On: July 25, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story roocks! i love it youu should update soon!! and i love the pairings!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 25, 2006 00:14 CDT
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Finally he came to his senses and decided to tell Sesshy about what Naraku is planning. I know it must have been hard for him to decide to risk his sister's life for the life of others. But I have a feeling Naraku is going to double-cross him anyway.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That almost left me speechless. That was THE twist I've ever read. Wow...that was good hope you will update soon. This story is the best in my book. I'm still shock that Gan the Gun is a girl...wow.
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALY LIKE THIS FIC SO PLAESE UPDATE SOON LATERZ!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it has a little of Inu and Kags but hey I'm not complaining about it. And that was funny how Bank and Shitora did. I'm glad that you got somebody for Shippo... nice.So I hope you update soon and keep on, keep on.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I your story shure is kickin off hey update soon and what will happen to kagome/inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 15, 2006 01:33 CDT
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I was right about it not being Ayame or Inuyasha. Shippo and Souten are hecka cute I hope their a future couple too. STILL LOVE THE STORY!
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Reviewed By: Roxi On: July 12, 2006 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry 2 lazt 2 log in but omg i love love love this and i love Shitora and Ranbou.I cant wait 4 you to ge them together newayz keep it up
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 12, 2006 17:39 CDT
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fINALLY THEY GOT TOGETHER NOW I THINK INU ANG KAGS ARE NEXT. AND I THINK KAGOME WILL BE THE FIRST ONE TO NOTICE THAT THE TWO ARE TOGETHER.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the next chapter is about Inuyasha and Kagome. Well keep it up and update soon.
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