| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: July 12, 2006 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWSSSSS....dat was cute...:D:D:D:D.....dere finally together... update it soon... -lotz of peace n respect n luv-
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 12:22 CDT
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I liked the chapter w/kagome and the gun when will the others comment on how well she knos how to shot a gun?
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Title: good luck
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thinking for your next chapter you could have a little bit of KagomeXInuYasha along with SangoXMiroku. And I am glad that sesshomaru and rin made up but if I were Kagome that night the fight happend I would of yelled "SESSHOMARU!!" went up to him and 'SLAP'. Just like sango is always doing to miroku.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fanfic and I am only on chapter 9. I am getting so excited of what will happen next. And the one thing that is puzzling me is will kagome and inuyasha fall for "plan hook-up" or will they continue screaming at eacthother. But anyway the reason I gave you a complete 10 on each rate was because I am total InuYasha fan and your fanfic is not like the others I have read, I was in the middle of one called "crazy little thing called love" and then I found yours and strayed away from it because this one really caught my attention. well I should get back to reading. Keep up the good work. P.S. what gave you the idea?
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good, keep it up. And update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Roxi Selvetie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another good chappie,can't wait 4 more
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 05, 2006 03:22 CDT
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I liked that you kinda forced more on Ranbou and Shitora cause they make a good couple.
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Reviewed By: Roxi On: July 03, 2006 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah another hot chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 03, 2006 17:55 CDT
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OMG good thing Kagome learned guns from her dad.They just can't stay out of trouble. And once again I love this story. The boys are going to flip when they find out.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 03:33 CDT
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Man all I could say is DAMN! That was amazing I mean WOW! How kagome just did that thank god she is good with guns that was man there are no words to descrive that. I hope Shitora will be alright in the next chapter. So update soon please.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story its funny, action, and romance just the why I like it. Can't wait till the next chapter. So update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: June 29, 2006 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i glad that you have updated and yes i can legally drive without a parental in the car with me! what a great summer!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: June 29, 2006 15:24 CDT
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Poor Rin 3 days is a long time for someone in her condition. They made a truce finally now what was up with that werid dream he had. I love this story. Shippo is super smart for his age.
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Reviewed By: Roxi On: June 29, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another great chapter!
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Title: AmAzInG!
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this story has to be my favorite out of all the story's i've read so far!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! :)
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