| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Reviewed By: blah. On: March 03, 2007 13:02 CST
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gahh.. this is a first. its march and you havn't updated..i really hope your still writing cause I really really like this story
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 14:32 CST
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i'm crying...its march and you havent updated since january. please update reallly, reallly, soon!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 20:43 CST
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update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Please Don-t Stop now!
Reviewed By: Animechic06 On: February 16, 2007 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear KLC Please please, dont stop now, i mean this story has such an interesting plot, such love stories...and all the cars and all, i mean we need to know what gan the gun says now that whitey knows her secret. I like the whole Shitora Rainbo trama....I-m ancious to hear more. Thanks for hearing me out...hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: blah. On: February 11, 2007 17:20 CST
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i love this story : )
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: February 10, 2007 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Know that was a THE best, but hope Ran is going to be ok and Shitora. And I'm just dieing to know what the hell those weird gun can do. Well in other case, hope you update and keep this up 'cause getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 13:22 CST
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ohmygosh you just love cliffies don't you? this story is the shiznit! this chapter was so exciting! i love the action parts and the nice fluffy moment betwen ranbou and shitora. those last words between naraku and kagome...whoa, intense. i'm not ready for death yet! please no death i can't take it. oh no i can't take the thought of kagome becoming a northerner. keep that blood from spilling! and if someone doesn't take her down from that cross soon suffocation will set in, thats how jesus died. (i go to a catholic school.) freaking awesome chapter! update really soon!
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Title: bad sango
Reviewed By: rebelgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 21:45 CST
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plz don't let them die i'll cry plz get kagome out of there and make her a wildcat plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: BrokenMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! You just left it! Why would you do something like that?! lol. Just picking. this story is great. Keep up the good work! I was thinking of writing one with teh same sort of concept (the whole gang theme, with the girl gang and guy gang together, but not together, and all) but i didnt want to put it up, and have someone think i was trying to copy you.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 18:52 CST
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please update soon!! i love this story!!! gotta go now!!! t.t.y.l. runs and does a 380 off teh page!!
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: January 31, 2007 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey... PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE IT SOON..... -lotz of peace n respect-
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Reviewed By: Kiriane On: January 27, 2007 21:57 CST
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I'm not one to beg, but... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! Thanks! :D
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:00 CST
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ooohhhh!!! that was SO evil.!!! oh well, please continue it and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 13:34 CST
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so good. this story makes a wonderful reading for those bad days like today for me. i am so hooked into your story from the very beginning. can't waint until next month's chapter.
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