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| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] | | Pages (26): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] | Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 23, 2006 01:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON THANK U.
| Reviewed By: inusakura_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the last chapter and i can't wait to see what inuyasha does to miroku. please hurry, i cant stand the suspence
| Title: Chapter 10!
Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: August 22, 2006 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese update soon! I can't wait to see how painful will Miroku-san's punishment will be! I just can't wait anymore! This story is too awersome! (Not to mention the evil cliffy!)
| Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 22, 2006 15:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something went wrong in my review..what was removed from it was basicilly that you update soon pleese that that I absolutly love this story. Pleese update it soon enough! {Oh btw Namine, thank you for that comment (though extremly long in my opinion) but you seemed to have mispelled my nick. It is Luna18, not LunaChick18. You've mispelled my name for another awersome Inu author by mistake, but it doesn't matter to me. That's rather common actually, but try to be more careful next time ok? Though you where porbably more procupated in running for your life than remembering names where you? Joke! It's a joke I swear!XD}
| Title: Chapter.10
Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 22, 2006 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stunning chapter just like the others! You never cease to amaze how wonderfully you write your stories! Now this fanfic can be called a real Inyasha story! (Not to mention the ultra-smexy Demon Inu!Huwaee!!I love Demon Inu!
| Title: STILL typing?!WTH, I'm running for my life! *flees*
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 22, 2006 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I get killed by the angry mob of tired & frustrated people who don't like wasting time reading loong re-views, I'd like to thank you for adding my name at the begining of Chapter.10 right before the Chapter begun. TTwTT I have to tell you that I feel honoured that you did , & I thank you a lot for that, (A LOOOOOOOT now that you mention it:P) but apart from me & Hyena, there are many other reviewers who keep you on your toes & help you out on update-checking & plot-prasing/criticising, like Anina, Boo-Boo, LunaChick18 & many many many others that would make up another long re-view on it's own. Also, I'd like to thank you for writing such a wonderfully composed story that make over-abused characters belive again that there are talented writers out there and that there aren't just the usual 'grab a pen & start abusing Inu-gang' people who thing that making Inu & Kag hump out of the blue is what makes an Inyasha fanfic an Inuyasha fanfic. You know what I mean..*shivers* That said, I hope you'll keep up the good work & will still keep up surpising us with your very original & creative ideas more & more. I hope to see more soon, and thank you again for being such a wonderful author!:D (Now I have to run away to the other side of the planet before the other reviewers find me in order to drown me in the nearest river. See you at the next update and good night *flees*)
| Title: Chap.10 {Part.2(??)}
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 22, 2006 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also, I'd like to point out at how you wonderfully portraited both Inuyasha & Kagome. Their relationship has turned quite soild, and there is already long threads of trust between the two. The way Inu's already this possesive of Kag (he's soo jealous of Miroku!X3) shows his usual gruff way of caring of somebody. & Kagome isn't the usual 'I trust everyone & everything!' like every person likes to portray her, but rather strong & determinated whenever neeeded, yet gentle & understanding when someone needs help. Just like the original Kagome. Also, you've got some real wicked sense of humor. The way the chapter ended was too hilarous! It really makes you laugh waterfalls yet at the same time keep you on your chair to see how on earth is Miroku doing to get out of trouble this time! (Though this time, I do think he's had it!) This 'rumor' of Kagome being pregnant is too far-fetched to me though. I'm sure that Kag's not in heat, & when she was, Inu had restrained himself from forcing himself on her even though he was a demon back then remember? Sure they had humped right after Kag got nearly raped, but she was already out-of heat & only somedays later they did it again, so I guess Kag is definitly NOT with-pup unless I'm wrong. I'd better stop writing now because I think I've wrote enough for today, lol..the longest review on this page probably! Sorry for this!XXD
| Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 22, 2006 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the way this chapter has started, with Human Inuyasha explaining to Kagome & Sango what happened exactly that day when he got sealed & why without the heavy burden of accepting Kikyou's request or Naraku's meddling. So light-tuned without the tragedies behind. (Not that Inu doesn't have enough Tragedies in his life already.) Also, now that Sesshoumaru's the main villian in this story, will Naraku not show up, or would he still show up somehow? Though without him, things would be real much better.0=3 I also like the way you made Miroku meet the Inu-gang even though the shards aren't involved in the storyline. Now that there are no shards, does that mean that our fav. pervert will not have his hand cursed with the blackhole? (Though the perverted hand curse doesn't count with that right?) Like Lil Rin said before, I also wonder if & how Inu & the rest are doing to meet Shippo with the shards getting involved in his father's death. Maybe the Thunder Brothers hunted him down for pure joy of killing maybe? That would soo be like what the T.B would do after all. I'm also super-duper curious wheather Fluffy would meet up with Rin or not. Probably not though, since Inu would need the sword to bash his brother up & her village would have to get killed by the wolves. & in this case, it would be bascily Sesshy's fault since he had summoned them from the north to the west. Ouch.
| Title: Chapter.10
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: August 22, 2006 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the scene of Human Inu at the begining of this chapter, even though it was rather short! The rest is great as usual, of course! Keep it up, & have a nice day meanwhile!
| Title: Ooops!
Reviewed By: Anina On: August 22, 2006 03:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to add the rating in my last commment... oops?XD~Anina-chan
| Reviewed By: Anina On: August 22, 2006 02:59 PDT
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I just checked the story today, when I discovered that there was already chapter 10 published & rated! Ahh! How didn't I realise that?!T__T That setteled, this chapter shows the blunter (& more acting than saying) monk that we all love-hate-love. I have to admit that I didn't expect Miroku to act this bold towards the ladies (especially Kagome) He thinks he's truly a ladie's man here, not just acting like it! Well, that's a side of him that we didn't expect. A side of him that needs to recive a good punishment from a certain hanyou we all know. Go Yashie!!! Beat the crap out of him!-But don't kill him,k?~Anina-chan
| Title: ^^ LOVEN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT GO INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Lil Rin On: August 20, 2006 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... So far you've given them all fairly ligitimate reasons to be where they are in spite of the lack of the tama. I wonder what you're going to do to explain why the hoshi is a hentai when he doesn't have to worry about a nice little hole tearing him apart by sucking him inside himself. I do not agree with the poster who wants to make her pregnant. She is not currently at mate status and therefore would be a hindrance if pregnant. Not to mention that no other demons would want to lay claim to her (Kouga) if she were "with pup." I am looking forward to what will be done about Rin and Shippo, or if they'll even be in the story at all. Without the extreme power boost of the jewel, the Thunder brothers would not have been able to kill Shippo's father, and at this rate I doubt Fluffy is going to find Rin in time to save her, since it was when Kouga attacked them that she was killed. I wish you luck with future chapters, but I also hope they come out soon, because I want to read them. Be proud. This is by far the longest response I have ever made.
| Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: August 19, 2006 12:45 PDT
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This is truly my absolute favorite IY fanfic! I really enjoy how you openly display the more animalistic (and more realistic, I think) side of Inuyasha. It's also really nice not having that whole Naraku backstory. One question, though -- they've had sex now quite a few times; is Kagome going to be pregnant anytime soon? I hope so!!
| Title: Heh..I hate the monk. SKIN HIM INU,SKIN 'IM!!
Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 17, 2006 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HOPE MIROKU FINALLY GETS THE PUNISHMENT HE DESERVES, TEH-HEH. AWERSEOME CHAPTER, PROBABLY THE BEST FROM ALL TILL NOW. UPDATE WHENEVER YOU CAN PLEESE.:3
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