| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alzea On: July 28, 2006 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic! Pleese update it soon, thanks!
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Title: IYFG?? GOSH!! :O
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: July 26, 2006 12:04 PDT
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You got nominated on IYFG? Gosh, that's wonderful! You desevered it, this fanfic is really nice! (& Human Inu has finally appeared!!I LOVE Human Inu!!YAY!!) Good luck at the IYFG!!!
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you like the demon side as much as I do! Saw this on IYFG and came over to read. I don't have much extra time and it's nice to spend it on a good fic. Good luck at IYFG! iPoe
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Hyena On: July 24, 2006 03:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON PLEEESE. THIS CHAP WAS BORING.
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Title: Just bored...want to help you out somehow.
Reviewed By: Leo Leonardo On: July 22, 2006 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you probably have a BETA writer somewhere helping you around, but here's a list of the very few spelling mistakes of this chapter you recently wrote. Chapter 9~Unintended MetamorphosisLine 37:Armor~Armour Line 80:Color~Colour Line 102:Gray~Grey Line 126:Cloths~Clothes That's all that I found..the rest looks good to me..you're pretty good in English, & that's good. I look foward to the next update of the story. {I'm sorry if I've offended you someway in this review :( }
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Title: The ears are gone, & I already miss them! :'(
Reviewed By: Anina On: July 22, 2006 11:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So let's see, since it's already time for Inuyasha to turn human, will we be able to see the Spider Demon that almost killed him that same night, or will it be a peaceful one without any youkai attacks at all, at least for that night? I'm at the edge of my seat just thinking about this all! You mispelled here & there in this chapter, but on the whole it's wonderful! I look foward for the next instalment! As soon as you start reading your stories, you just can't stop! Heh!~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: July 22, 2006 11:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I re-read Chapter 9, and I really like the bit where you wrote when Inuyasha & gang where kicked out of the village that they found for shelter when they realised that Inuyasha was a Hanyou. Not that I hate him & acutally have fun watch our favorite Hanyou being chucked out, but many people tend to ignore that bit of Inu's tragic life just because the villagers are human just like us. Phhfftt...it's not like we act better towards other people nowadays. Even though in the manga this tiny weeny fact IS rarely shown (modern touch comes in, I guess) I think all the villages in which the Inu gang payed a vist did say a thing between them just because he was a half-demon. & even though the humans can't hear them (Especially Kagome) they to tend to ignore that fact without them wanting to, but with Inu's really sensitive ears..lord, the horror's the poor guy must have heared & still hears about him! Poor Inuyasha...:'( (Edited because I'm a baka!)
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Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: July 22, 2006 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I re-read Chapter 9, and I really like the bit where you wrote when Inuyasha & gang where kicked out of the village that they found for shelter when they realised that Inuyasha was a Hanyou. Not that I hate him & acutally have fun watch our favorite Hanyou being chucked out, but many people tend to ignore that bit of Inu's tragic life just because the villagers are human just like us. Even though in the manga it IS rarely shown (modern touch comes in, I guess) I think all the villages in which the Inu gang payed a vist did say a thing between them just because he was a half-demon. & even though the humans can't hear them (Especially Kagome) they to tend to ignore that fact without them wanting to, but with Inu's really sensitive ears..lord, the horror's the poor must have heared & still hears about him! Poor Inuyasha...:'(
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Namine On: July 22, 2006 10:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated, I'm so glad! Got to admit, I was mildly surpised to see that it was Kagome who actually removed Sesshoumaru's limb from his body & not Inuyasha. Guess it was expected though, since Inu didn't have Tessusaiga with him to chop his brother's arm off. Lol, Kagome did it for him instead! About near the end of the chapter though, there's something that really quers me. When Inu turned human for the first time in the manga, he & Kag had met Shippo (But that could have changed since they met Sango instead) & after the Thunder Brothers bit, a few days (Or a week by the looks of it) passed before they encountered the Spider Demon, thus the night of new moon. In your story though, only 2 days passed since the issue of Fluffy's greeting, & yet Inu's already human. Maybe it's because of time lapse in where Kag spent some time with Demon Inu (God I miss him!), but this still confuses me a bit. Oh well, I'm sure you'll clear all puzzles by your next update. :D Chapter 9, on the whole is another great chapter of yours. & I love tiny plot twists here & there, especially if they're good. I'll look foward for the next update! & big congrats for your acheivement of 100+ reviews. You surely deseved it!
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Title: Review break! :D
Reviewed By: Anina On: July 14, 2006 10:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You broke 100 reviews, that's wonderful! (I had no doubts about that, your story is great!) You certainly DO deserve this! Congratulations!!!~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: Ronnika On: July 14, 2006 01:18 PDT
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YAY!!!! great chapter. Hope that you'll be able to update faster I've been on the edge of my seat since the last chapter. Wonders what other characters you'll bring into your story. Atleast Sango's right about InuYasha being an handsome human! but I love the ears to much *tweak tweak* :P.
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:15 PDT
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Amazing chapter. I have to admit I loved that it was Kagome who took Sesshomaru's arm off while she was protecting Inuyasha instead of the other way around. I love those little twists like that. Excellent job as always. I can't wait for the next chapter. They always end too soon! Congrats on breaking 100 reviews. You certainly deserve it.
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Title: Another good one!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I'm so glad to see that you updated. I can't believe he forgot he turns human one night a month! And Sango seems to be starting to come around. Anyway, I look forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: PI-KA-CHU On: July 13, 2006 08:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Pleese update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 11:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I love the whole plotline! very good, can't wait to see more!!
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