| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rid-chan On: June 03, 2006 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even when he was a full-youkai, Inuyasha still started to care for Kagome, even though not as one would care for a mate (for now:P) but who knows? Maybe the next time he turns into Full demon he'll treat her a tad bit better than he did before he turned back to hanyou? Hmmm? I really like the way you portray full-youkai Inuyasha. True, you got him to be almost all animalistic both in thought and action, but many people just portay him as either a ill-minded creature which just turns into a bloodthirsty killing machine or turns into a lust machine, & that miriclusy on it's own makes the relationship between Inu & Kag go all sparky & happy humping with no care in the world, & then go all 'I love you' smockes. Out of the blue. No doubts or anything. Might as well aspect to see some sudden 'spark' in the actual manga soon then no? (8|) Yeah, basiclly that happened in your story, but at least as wild as he is, InuYasha's youkai side doesn't seem to want to hurt Kagome, lesser pack member or not. & here he isn't a mindless creature seeking blood either (unless threated) because when he found Kagome in her bloody state, instead of killing her to spare her the pain (Like humans do to animals when in pain, inteasd of helping them as much as one would tdo to another human in pain, they just put them to sleep:I find that VERY cruel to them :'() his 'concience' made him not do so & so decided to take her to his domain even though she was a total stranger to him. How much nicer can a full-youkai be? Can't wait to read more of this fic!
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Absolutely wonderful! I love what you've done so far with the story. I have to admit I'm going to miss the blunt, animalism of fully demon-InuYasha, so I hope he doesn't disappear completely. I hope that doesn't sound like criticism, because it's really not. You are doing a fantastic job. I love where the story is going and I hope to see more chapters soon! I await each with the utmost anticipation.
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Reviewed By: selina On: May 31, 2006 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh please please update soon, oh man evil cliffhangers kepp me thinking all day. so hopefully you will update really soon love selina
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. Well written and in character. Inuyasha is so sweet when he is caring for Kagome. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:01 PDT
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Very interesting, can't wait for more!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 18:16 PDT
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OK let's see... I'm so happy you updated! but now I have some questions. Is inuyasha going to be different now? more like in the anime or something? damn, I liked him when he was animalistic! oh well, I'm interested in the story moving forward too...I liked you scene with yura, it was short, but it covered all the bases, good job with that. I liked when Kag. put Sango in her place (pushy witch!) and I liked the way you adapted the kotodama rosary...thaat is what it was right? No suggestions really... you're doing fine. I'll talk to you again at the next update! -entropy9
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Title: You're back!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 15:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another really enjoyable chapter. Kagome is learning to use her powers, and InuYasha is a hanyou again. I can't wait to learn more, and find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Anna333 On: May 24, 2006 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this story was exactly what i was looking for!!! yay!! i was hoping someone would make a story like this i just never had the time to want to write so i like to read lol but anyways i love it!!!!!! update very soon u cant stop now its geting to the good parts!!! lol oh and i get the whole ruting* thing lol i dont think some ppl got it tho from what i read but i do! let me tell u what i think just incase im wrong lol ok well he had sex with her cuz he needed his sent to be on her so other demons wouldnt be to tempted to harm her but ya they like each other but shes not his MATE! yet lol so ya i get it shes just the pack femail right? well i hope thats right lol anyways keep up plz im dying to know what happends nxt plzz seriously or ill forget lol and i really like this one tho ok so keep wrirting!
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Reviewed By: kekarson@hotmail.com On: May 18, 2006 16:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a wonderful story, I do hope you finish this. It's quite a nice plot, that I have to say is Quite original; though at fisrt i was weary, I'm glad I read this. It's nicely written too. I personally love how you have portrayed Inuyasha. Also the demon habbits, like never eatting in bed, is quite a nice toutch. Otherwise, it was quite one of the best(unfinished I presume) stories I've read.
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 22:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this. it's like nothing i've ever read before. i think the idea is wonderfully original. i can't wait to see what happens. i'm curious if inuyasha will revert to his hanyou self during this story. i am also curious as to how and if, you will incorporate Miroku and Shippou into the story.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 16:48 PDT
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YAY! I'm so glad you are continuing the story. I just wish I could get some inu-kag time because frankly, those humans are obnoxious! I'm so glad you kept kagome nice and kind like she is in the anime, but you didn't turn her into a wimp! In some fanfics, she just let's everyone bully her because she's so nice, but i like that she stood up for inuyasha. Sango is kind of a witch though, she's got a bad attitude and i know she'll come around, but yeah i don't like her right now. umm what else? oh yeah, don't move too fast! I knoe kag likes inu, but if it moves too fast it isn't believable...well i trust you anyway, you're a good writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what I have read so far please update soon.
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Title: love this...
Reviewed By: lunatic kat On: May 16, 2006 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how you are developing the relationship between inu and kag. Demon Inu doesn't seem to pussyfoot around much and I love how direct you're writing him. Can't wait to see what you do next. Please keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 20:20 PDT
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*claps hands* Squee! Inu is attatched to Kagome! And he protects her and cares for her... that's so sweet... I'm so happy about this story. It's so fascinating, how their relationship functions. It's not solely primal, but it's also not all lovey-dovey. It's great. I applaude you.
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Reviewed By: inusakura_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter to a great story. can't wait to read the next chapter.
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