| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dreamer6164 On: May 12, 2006 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT THIS IA ONE OF THE BEST
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Mystic Kat On: May 12, 2006 17:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ToTaLLY sEXiDeLIc mE
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: heavens lil cherry On: May 12, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: staralinga On: May 12, 2006 17:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Kawaii YESH Definatly Kawaii
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: entropy9(not signed in) On: May 11, 2006 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. There are very few spelling errors, making it easy to read. I have also seen this plot before (well similar ones) but I feel like you have made it truly interesting because of your excellent writing style. I really enjoy reading this fic, I admit I don't review often at all (maybe two other times) but I want to stick with this fic and will review every new chapter that comes out! Keep it up, I can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: moonlight black rose On: May 09, 2006 16:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for a nother AWESOME chapter don't give up i love it
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 09, 2006 02:10 PDT
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Damnit, no! Kagome belongs there! Baka, baka, baka! Baka no Sango! *grumble* Besides, that lemon was sweet. I love this story, just how simply instict driven it is... it's wonderful
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 23:55 PDT
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Your story has followed an interesting deviation to the story of Inuyasha. The grammar has been very well done and there have been very few spelling errors. There is one thing that feels 'out of place' and that is the references to Kagome being a pack female and Inuyasha refering to himself as the alpha male. I doubt if those terms were coined in that time period. If he is being ruled by his animal blood to the point he has trouble speaking then refering to himself as the alpha just feels wrong and deflates the emotion of the passage. I realize a lot of fans like those terms but the emotions you showed in the paragraph, I find it hard that any of his words would be coherent. I read very little Inuyasha fanfiction because a lot of the writers end up catering to fanservice and loose the excellent story plots they started with in favor of quick chapters and loads of reviews. So far I have been pleased that your fiction does not fall into this catagory. I hope it continues to be a well written and interesting mature diversion from the original story line.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 21:29 PDT
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this is an excellent story I like how you've changed the main story of inuyasha, it's very well written and I cannot wait to see how it turns out update soon please
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Title: please
Reviewed By: inukag123 On: May 08, 2006 07:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i love you're story please get a new chapter
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Reviewed By: Andrea Ray On: May 06, 2006 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. Please don't give it up. I know a lot of people who have.
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Title: go
Reviewed By: shippofan On: May 06, 2006 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. I really want you to continue. I am even going to add your story to my favs so I can keep up with you!
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Reviewed By: shippof On: May 06, 2006 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on updating please don't stop this is relly good
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Title: Do dat shyt!!
Reviewed By: The_InuGrrrl_Cometh (NSI) On: May 06, 2006 08:56 PDT
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My girl, I am loving this fic! I love full demon Yasha, and I love his relationship with Kags. It's forming SO nicely and soooo kawaii. Sessie...damn, he's fucked up, lol. I love the way you're writing him, because we both know how hard he can be. Okay, I'm off to read your other fic *waggles brows* ~Ki
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Reviewed By: Great! On: May 04, 2006 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update its the best! I cant wait to read what happens next!!
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