| "Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 228 ] |
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 15, 2006 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait 'til he tells her who he is. I don't think she'd believe him without seeing it for herself, but I still think he should tell her before he transforms back into a youkai. - Cochrann
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 11:52 EDT
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AWWWWWWW!!!!! That was a great chappie!!!! HE FINALLY RELIZES THAT ALL HUMANS AREN"T BAD!!!! YEA! He finally shows emoition With memories! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 13, 2006 00:22 EDT
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wow...you are a great hentei writer! update soon -Cochrann
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 12, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. Can you say yummy? ^.^
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was amazing you know how much I love my smutty goodness, and yet he was still so sweet and had this sincerenes about him, and I like that a lot. The fact that he knows he could have overpowered her and still took it slow and was gentle with her was great. Ive taken to this story, and get so excited getting the notification in my inbox. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 12, 2006 22:11 EDT
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I was surprised. She did very well! But then again, she cares for him very much. I hope the two do well...
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was AWESOME! Don't worry I read this one to myself. I'm trying to get posted, I'm still working on my story line I want to have it done before it posts. Again AWESOME chapter!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: entropy9 ( not signed in) On: June 12, 2006 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE! lemony fresh! I'm so excited to read this just as a fic and not beta'ing it...it was very hot, without being smutty, although, if anyone could pull off smutty and still be taken seriously as a writer, well i know it's you! so let's see...sexshoumaru is admiting to himself how he feels about takana. and it's so sweet that he cares for her enough to take things slow. i love how he is a new character everytime you work with him, not repetitive or predictable at all...i'm drooling in anticipation of when this relationship moves forward. almost there with the ratings by the way (i'm really enjoying this fic now)
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Reviewed By: Lamb (not signed in) On: June 11, 2006 14:42 EDT
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tsk tsk...naughty brower....a lovely set up for a lemon that would be, eh? lol, awww, isn't that adoable? Sesshomaru has a heart... oOoOoO can't wait for the next chapter, which I'm sure will be juicy, lemon or no, when she wakes up to find herself naked and wrapped in the equally naked arms of sesshomaru....hmm...that is, unless of course, you have her being dreadfully ill and not waking up for several days.....hmm..I'm not sure I like that idea as much, it's not as much fun....;)
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 11, 2006 01:13 EDT
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She's...gonna have a scare when she wakes up, ain't she?
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 10, 2006 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my my my
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 20:51 EDT
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Wow this is a really good story! I love the fact that Sess is so confused1 Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was stick in bed, so I had to catch up on your story so it took a while. Mikkie read me what I missed, but it's not the same as reading it my self. You've got my heart pounding, and the babies always start kickking when I read it out loud to them. I believe you have 2 new fans! We need more please! We are SO LOVING it! Do I sense a lemon coming on ^_~! I'll try to post my story soon I can't wait for you to see it, I work on it on the days when the twins have me imobile.~B reading U soon! Nikkie23534
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooh, I really liked this chapter. He didn't have much agenda, so I hope she doesn't freak out when she wakes up to find a naked sesshomaru laying beside her. However, it should be exciting to see how she does react to it. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 01:15 EDT
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tsk, poor sesshomaru. It's a shame he had to lie, but as you - or rather he ;) said- he really didn't have a choice in the matter. he simply couldn't cause her that kind of hurt, not to mention what she would do kickng him out and all....hmm..I was going to point out all the other reasons, but I realised that I was just repeating what you had wrote in your lovely chapter, and thought how that would be just pointless. I also liked the change-up yu had there with the chapter settings - the day one hundred seventy four(?) - evening (even though, as I said, many many times, I like the way you have it set up normally). of course, you really didn't have much choice, unless you wanted to do a flashback, I suppose. hmmm...I jsut realised that I really don't have anything to say, other than another great chapter, and have jsut been rambeling on almost this entire review. so I'm going to stop now, and let you get back to the other reviews which actually have something to say :) until next time - Lamb :D
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