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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:54 EDT
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You're very right, he does. I guess him lying was the best course of action after all. I can't say I'm disappointed, because I agree with him, which is pretty surprising to myself. But he does need to sort out his thoughts, and think about it, and make sense of it all. It makes a whole lot of sense. I love this. Very much.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah, the inner turmoil that Sesshy has to deal with. Its so obvious hes trying so damn hard to not like her, but its not working one bit. ^^ Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 08, 2006 20:20 EDT
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I know this is a stupid statement, especially for Sesshomaru... But, that shouldn't change anything, just because he remembered... that's so sad.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 07, 2006 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, he remembered. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was so good! I love the way that you write. I can't wait to read more update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 16:45 EDT
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I'm not going to rate this chapter. Tens just aren't good enough for it. This story is great, and I look forward to the next chapter. I'll read it to Mikkie when she calls.-B reading U!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy this chapter indeed. I knew it was only a matter of time until he regained his memories. And I liked it this way, well not the fact that shes so broken up by it, but how the reference made him remember. Very good chapter. I can't wait to see what he does from here. ^^ Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 13:56 EDT
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oOoOoOoOoh...and the plot thinkens! another great chapter! I wonder what seshomaru will do now, and also, what will happen when she finds out who he really is... or should I say WHAT he really is. ooohh I can't wait for the next chapter....no matter the length. ;)
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 13:56 EDT
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oOoOoOoOoh...and the plot thinkens! another great chapter! I wonder what seshomaru will do now, and also, what will happen when she finds out who he really is... or should I say WHAT he really is. ooohh I can't wait for the next chapter....no matter the length. ;)
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 07, 2006 10:29 EDT
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omg...this chapter was awesome!! Update Soon!!! - Cochrann
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Title: Great job!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Just read chapters 7 & 8 together, OMG! This story of yours is amazing! 'Verbal attack of diarrhea' that was the best! I was reading this to Mikkie is on the phone, and she's still laughing at that. Way to put your foot in your mouth Sess! The tension is getting a little bit thicker, it's always a good thing to tease. In my opinion Sess has had it way to easy all his life, the BRAT! I guess he shouldn't be so hard on InuYasha mom. Granted she wasn't raped, but she was force out of her home and she had it worse than Takana. Being a parent ain't easy much less a single parent. At least Takana didn't have that two deal with too. Keep your head up Takana! Again, great story can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks- B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Dragone On: June 06, 2006 07:53 EDT
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Normally I just read quietly and enjoy and move on, but there's one thing I just can't leave this time: "verbal attack of diarrhea" should be "attack of verbal diarrhea" Thanks for writing! Please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy oh Sesshy, when are you going to kiss the woman already?
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 05, 2006 23:40 EDT
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I'm so happy with this story... it's so romantic... I love it! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 22:32 EDT
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hmm...quite an interesting chapter for character develompent...although, I guess that your whole story is almost entirely about charactr development....lol, anyway, it was pretty goodchapter. I really hate it when there are such huge misunderstandings between two people that they simply can't get by it because they refuse to TALK to each other ( you see it a LOT in inu/kag fics) and it's kind of the same with what happened with Takana believing that she was worthless, except that you didn't do it in a way that I hated, and you didn't have pag after page based on that misunderstanding, you cleared it up right away, so major kudos! and although I think that you may have gone just a little overboard with sesshomaru's emotions when he was telling her that she was not worthless, I don't think that there was an better way that you could have done that scene and everything. also, I was kind of wondering early on in your story, when we first learned of Takana's rape and again after reading this chapter, who the youkai was that raped her....is it just a random youkai, or was it maybe....someone we are familiar with...? I also wonder, whichever of the two it was, what kind of youkai it was? will you be touching on that more, later on in the story, or is it just something for us to be left guessing about? can't wait for more, but hope that the next chapter is a little longer (I tried, I REALLY tried not to say aynything, I didn't for the last two chapters, but I just couldn't not say anything anymore, it was killing me...)as I - how shall I say this - am not a lover of short chapters... I much much prefer longer ones. ah, well, I guess, you being the author and all that I will just have t live with whatever you put out there. as I said, I hope what you put out there next is soon, and jsut as good!
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