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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 18:11 EDT
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God, waiting for the juicy (lemon)/ spicy (fights)parts is like being preggers all over again! I love the way you bring thing to a slow boil! I can't wait for the baby, I just hope Takana comes out of the delivery ok. Women in those days had a tendency to die, back then. Hey, I have been wondering about this for a long time. I know that this story has nothing to do with him, but where is InuYasha? I mean dealing with human emotions is something that Sesshomaru isn't really good at. Especially matters of the heart. Since Inu has had some dealings with the subject, maybe he ought to give his aniki some pointers? Then again, maybe not! Great job, looking forward to the next chapter~ B reading U! P.S. baby Takana has learned a new word canny! She was just introduced to candy, thanks to her father... I'm gonna kill him!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 02:01 EDT
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The new chapter is simple awesome! I can't wait to read about the baby! I hope it's born soon. And when will we see more tender moments with Sess and Takana? I miss the way she curses at him and makes him feel like a 2 year old! Great chapter- B reading U!
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 13:21 EDT
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I almost hope that the hanyou is still alive, because he would love this. Inu would torment him until Sess kicked his ass sideways. Anyway, great update, as usual. Bring on the baby, because the image of Sess changing diapers is one that must be seen by all!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the character development. And I like when things all tie into eachother, so no worries about me. I can't wait to read more. I think I'm going to go in withdrawls if I dont get a nice Sess fix though. lmao
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Reviewed By: The_Scarlet_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I waited forever for this update, so I'm so excited that you finally decided to put it up. I like how Sesshomaru has continued to become more... human? More open throughout this story. Not just the Lord Of the Western Lands, but more of a person with emotions and feelings.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 12:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I should have known better than to leave you to finish that threat! :) and no, no cookies. something much more sinister....like chocolate fudge brownies...so rich and sugary you can feel your pancreas shutting down as you eat them....damn, now I want a brownie. ;) anyway, about the story, ok, so that chappie didn't look like it had so much to do with the plot, but it was enjoyable and intriguing as well. I though for sure that you were going to bring up inuyasha, but maybe you already did at the beginning and i have forgotten. I must go and review that..... *ponders*.... hmm...anyway, still interestind having sesshomaru and yuti as brother and sister? but why is she just a gneral then, would she not have a higher position of power? or at least a title, if not the power. or did she give it up to be a general? wow lots of quistions...and im sure i know what the answers will be...'just wait and see' and then something to do with cookies ;) so fine, I'll wait. not always patiently, but ill wait.
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist(offline) On: May 09, 2007 12:25 EDT
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So Sess has two full demon brothers of one and one half, I wonder... Still it is a great twist. As always I await the next update and Sarath is probably going to regret his plot. They alway do in the end.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:45 EDT
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You are on a roll! Keep up the great work! ~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:44 EDT
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You are on a roll! Keep up the great work! ~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I liked this Chapter but I'm telling you I'm starting to loathe Sarath. I think he should die a painful slow death of like bleeding to death or something. Grr..... haha Anyways, am I on glue or did you mean Sesshoumaru was Yuti's sister. I guess we'll find out!! XD
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 14:02 EDT
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Did I miss something...is Yuti Sesshoumaru's sister? Wow...that tottally took me by surprise!
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! your back!! I know I slacked with the reviewing before, but I was still reading, and then you left.... *tear* you said you were only going out for milk and never came back....8| hmm..well anyway, glad to see that you didn't abandon us :) I loved the new updates, but i hate that sarath guy. I hope its slow and extremely painful. you know, his demise and all. and although i hope its slow, make it happen soon. he's gonna mess things up, stupid jerk! and just when things are going so well. *pouts* oh well, i trust that leaving it in your capable hands you wont allow it to turn into some massive disaster story. especialy cause I think your ever faithful reviewers would hunt you down and....well, ill let you fill in the rest ;) p.s. bummer. i can't believe I missed reveiw like a pirate day! *pouts*
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Reviewed By: lil_lo (not signed in) On: May 06, 2007 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stopped to review at chapter 5 because I already have built up anticipation about "Shin" turning into a youkai after what Tanaka has been through. I like the overall situation because its a more realistic way of Sess possibly falling in love. I love that Tanaka is herself and not the shadow of other Inu Characters or a Mary Sue (the real reason why people hate OC). I am usually pretty fierce when it comes to who Sess ends up with, but Tanaka has my blessing.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yays. I must say the more frequent chapters the more I get all happy. haha. Anyways I must have misunderstood, but hey thats good that you werent going to leave us hanging. Anyways on to the chapter review. Aww that totally made me cry, or at least having silent tears falling down my cheeks. That was such a sweet and tender moment and I adored that. That was perfect. And oooh Sesshoumaru is not going to be happy with whatever plan he has in store for Takana. I hope he dies painfully. And on that note. Have a great day and write more soon. XD
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Reviewed By: Susanne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 03:09 EDT
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Very sweet. I shudder to think what the literal snake in Paradise is going to wreak. Hopefully his ending will be suitably messy!
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