| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: ForBloodIsLife [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 10:05 EDT
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This has been a great fic! Luckily I just started reading, so I'm not as bad off as everyone else, but still! I hope to see more soon! You're a great writer! I love it!
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 21:52 EDT
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i know, i suck. but i'm writing it still, i swear to god. i know it's been two years but i'll post something soon. have faith in me... lol
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Title: What
Reviewed By: StaindGT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to tell people your not going to finish! I love the story, it's my top ten but to not finish it? I am very upset.
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 19:17 EST
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this is an outstanding story Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 20:36 EDT
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Again this story is increadble, just don't quit writing. I can live with the long updates just dont quit on us.
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 00:26 EDT
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Wow, I thought that was a great chapter. I really felt the emotion, especially when they were yelling about playing games and Bulma plotting against him (I think, right when he gets all of his memory back)... I thought that was very-well done. I'm also very intrigued now by this whole trust thing. How the tables have turned! For both of them, actually. Vegeta has to put his complete faith in someone he KNOWS hates him (loved that part too btw - "You'll come back for me?" I can just hear the venom in his voice) and now Bulma is possibly realizing the Saiyans are the lesser of two evils -- but how is she going to get out of this one, or will she try at all? Hmmm... I really like how you show so subtly how their opinions of each other are formed and change, like B referring to them as "men" and V admiring her technological genius. Excellent character development throughout. I even find myself wondering how Brolli is faring through all of this and what he'll think when all is said and done. Thanks for the new chapter, look forward to more! :)
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 01:18 EDT
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Sorry, I am way late leaving a review... That last chapter was amazing! AMAZING! I was on the edge of my seat there was SO much going on, not just on the surface but everything boiling just beneath. I actually feel a little sorry for Bulma. It seems everything is catching up with her and Vegeta is just too darn good at what he does to make her feel unsure of herself!! I love it! I was totally surprised by the whole Frieza thing, I find myself wondering why Bulma gritted her teeth before warning them, was she deciding whether or not to warn them? Or was she just steeling herself up for it, maybe she didn't really understand what was coming? I'm so intrigued to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: sai-yan1 On: September 30, 2005 13:59 EDT
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I really do like your story, it's wonderful! But halfway through chapter three, the saiyan words started to grate on my words as I had to look at the translations. Your work would be much more enjoyable if you decreased your use of 'saiygo'.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: September 14, 2005 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a very well written chapter. You are spoiling us with all of these updates. I'm very excited to read the next chapter. I'm glad Vegeta will no longer be controlling Bulma for the moment. The Saiyans do have to pay for what they did. Especially the way they treated Bulma.
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say enough with what has already been said by everyone else. Its one of the finest stories around, nothing else needs to be said.
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Title: sensational!
Reviewed By: bluedragon (not signed in) On: September 13, 2005 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear gods, this story is so dangerously good! Just the way you display the mind's of each character is simply amazing, bravo! Can't wait to read more! ^___^ Love, BD.
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged) On: August 23, 2005 04:34 EDT
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Oh my gosh I had an inkling that Vegeta knew of her plans but she has just blatantly admitted to conspiring against the throne and he hasn't done anything or more specifically he hasn't revealed anything, I am desperate to know what he has planned especially Brolly, what exactly is he waiting for? There must be more to his scheme then making her a slave
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged) On: August 23, 2005 04:14 EDT
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What a remarkable story so far, Vegeta seems to be the victor so far in this tragic game of love but I wonder if the tables may turn later on for we have yet to hear from Brolly, and I wonder what Vegeta agreed to in order to convince Brolly to make Bulma a slave again. Vegeta's guile is so intriguing especially his ability to discern exactly what it is Bulma needs by fulfilling her unspoken dreams that she had on her home planet, dreams she felt were impossible to come true. I like the way you represent this by having Vegeta speak her native tongue, for he knows that speaking her language enables her to think of him as more of an equal instead of a dominating and colonizing force, which is the effect created when one is made to speak the saiyan language-the language of the conquerors. I am absolutely enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 16:11 EDT
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That was intense. I loved the buildup of Bulma's control about to break backdropped against the calm facades of Vegeta and Brolli. Poor thing, that meeting with Brolli really did her in! Vegeta sure knows what he's doing! I'm just so intrigued by this story. Can't wait for the next update!!
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Title: You Updated!! :)
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:01 EDT
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Oh my God, this is one of my favorite stories and I'm so happy to see that you've updated! I meant to tell you when you posted the last chapter that I was soooo happy to see an update. I was a faithful reader up until the last chapter you posted in 2003, and was checking every so often for an update but then life got the better of me and I didn't come by for a while. I was so surprised when, the last time I checked, there were TWO chapters waiting for me! And now, here's another one. :) That is great. This is such a well-told story, and even after all this time I'm so interested in what's going to happen. You really are an incredible writer. I feel terrible that I didn't leave a review last time I stopped over, considering how much I enjoy this story. I thought I had, but I see that my name does not appear in the review pages. Sorry! Anyway, your story is amazing. I just LOVE the turn of events with Vegeta taking "ownership" of Bulma and how he is using her freedom against her. Ooh. I just can't WAIT to read the new chapter but I don't have time right now :( Hopefully I will be a good reader and remember to come back this time to review (sorry). Thanks for continuing with the story!!
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