| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 07, 2005 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Surprise! I'm shocked to this story updated so soon! Will this be a pattern now, I hope so! Glad Bulma is figuring out what those two are up to. I hope Bulma remains strong and outsmarts them. You are doing a wonderful job with this story, and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again your work continues to be impressive, its almost flawless when you let them speak. Description and their actions are to the letter. I would expect nothing less though, your work before is always great.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: July 06, 2005 23:45 EDT
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awesome... I like the new chapter and that bulma is now giving in more and more to vegeta... this is a great story and I love the way your characters are all trying to play each other... the kind of story I love... great job
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: zonkiethegreat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading this story greatly, you personiphy everyone quite well and play emotions to the letter. I mainly like how you do Broly's(Or Brolli as you put him) character. I wish I could write my stories as well as you but hey I can't help that. Well this story is great and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: May 21, 2005 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you updated! There are very few good stories that are being posted. I hope Bulma will figure out what those two are up to. I hope you update soon!
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Title: wowza!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!! This story just keeps getting better and better! The suspense is mind bending!!!! I'm so happy you've updated, it was totally worth the wait, superb chapter, I'm simply blown away!!! Can't wait for the next one!!! ^__^ love, Blue Dragon
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 09:56 EDT
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have not read it yet just wanted to say BLOODY HELL YOU'RE ALIVE ALIVE :)
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 21, 2005 00:19 EDT
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of all the chapters so far that was byfar my favorite... I loved the interaction of Bulma and Vegeta, the perspective of her mind that you gave was fantastic and so well done... girl you really did a fantastic job on that chapter... I loved it
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Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 18:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! I cant wait till the next chapter comes ot! dont leave me hangin!
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: December 07, 2004 22:02 EST
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I'm not signed in but I'm a member and this is just an awesome story... I really can't wait to read more... yayness
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Reviewed By: nona On: September 03, 2004 01:30 EDT
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Wow it's been long huh? Elated to hear that this fic will be given due attention. And finally, the first lemon too hehe~ You're really keeping us on our toes right now. Brolli has lost the game already but is Veggie going to lose a little bit of his sanity too? Please please please update soooner... and i mean sooner than 1 year.
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Title: woah!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so addicted to this story! I've been reading it since you began, and I'm so happy that you've continued it! I love how you give Bulma such power, yet you still make her so soft and tender like the woman she is. And Brolli and Vegeta....oh gods, don't get me started! (drooolll!!!) Love what you're doing, can't wait for more!!!! Blue Dragon.
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! You have such a great writing style. It's so original, I've never read a fic where Bulma is so manipulative of men. I luv the conflict between her and Vegeta. Could this story please end up BV? PLEEAAAAASE? ::pout::
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: August 03, 2004 12:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story which clearly display the fact that if you play with fire you are going to get burned. I absolutely love Brolli in this fic and never thought i'd come across a story where i can sympathise and understand him so well. In Brolli's fight for dominance over Bulma i find my self rooting for him. Then again i can understand bulmas need to defend herself against a race who automatically made themselves an enemy the moment they destroyed her home planet. She feels she owes them no sympathies whatsoever since they never showed her any. I worry that Bulma has bit off more than she can chew for messing with Raaditz is one thing but trying to best The King and Prince of the saiya-jins aswell as the legendary not to mention Furiza is pushing it. I can't wait to see what happens next in the battle of dominance between Bulma, Brolli and Vegeta.
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