| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: update
Reviewed By: astier (hiroko) On: April 01, 2004 15:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and your style, and all the other stuff that everybody else has written, but the clock is ticking, and a year's anniversary is approaching since YOUR LAST UPDATE!@!!!
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Reviewed By: *Thee Untamed* On: January 09, 2004 17:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply hate giving away all tens, but you really did earn them in your writing, I'm displeased at how slow it is to update this project. I know we all have lives, but this is to grand to lose people to due to the fact that you don't update. Ja'ne *Thee Untamed*
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Reviewed By: babyblueeyes On: October 13, 2003 13:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY AND WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I don't even know what to say. I abosolutely love this sory sooo much. It's so deep, and something I've never seen in a V/B, especially Bulma's inner workings and attitude. I can't wait until the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI, you finally updated!
I totally appreciate that this is not a mindless lemony fic *I REALLY like the story* AND that Bulma is not the meek, OOC slave girl, she's smart, has a strong personality and knows how to show her assets much like the show ^_^
I hope that updating more frequently won't be out of the question.
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear God woman, I didn't know you had updated! And what an update O_O. I think Bulma is in some major deep shit now. She pissed off Brolli into a transformation and now he and Veggie are gonna plot to get even. Scares the hell outta me what plans they may have up their sleeves. Looks like Vegeta is on to her where Freeza is concerned and I don't like her chances. Great chap Mibi and I can't wait for the next!! ^_^ Since this fic will be around for quite a while, do you think you could put me on your mailing list, if you have one that is? Here's my addy: suenami927@yahoo.com. I'd appreciate it. Thanks ^_^. |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 08, 2003 10:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
You write with such detail and color I could feel Bulmas pain. I loved it, great chapter. christabeleve |
Reviewed By: vbfanatic On: June 03, 2003 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having sampled almost every single readable B/V fic on fanfiction.net, mm.org, and all other fan sites, I have to say that you are probably one of the best B/V writers out there. You are capable of adding immense detail and depth to your fictions - something I really enjoy since 90% of most fanfics are entirely plot driven, lemon driven or feature OOC protagonists. I really hope you eventually take time to finish this (i see that it has dragged on for more than a year) coz I think it has great potential to a B/V classic (this A/U actually reminds me a bit of Lisalu's A Glad Day). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 10:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Mibi take whatever time you need to put up the next chap. I can wait. Besides, you shouldn't rush a great fic ^_^.
suenami927@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: April 16, 2003 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By far one of my top 5 favorite B/V fics ~ if it goes in the right direction it will for sure be up there with the B/V epics : ) Love both Bulma and Vegeta's character development. Definitely hope you'll eventually finish it up (plzzzzz?) |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 02:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I've been cheaking so often I think this is one of the best stories you've written so far.
I don't normally ask but the suspense is killing me :( |
Reviewed By: maiyuan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 08:39 EST
Comment/Review:
ahh!! when are you going to update??? i wanna know what happens!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: maiyuan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 23:32 EST
Comment/Review:
when are you planning to update again!!!!!????? WAAA!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 15:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Whoa... interesting turn of events!! I'm glad to see Vegeta playing games with Bulma for a change. She really is manipulative, not that I can blame her for all that's happened. But she's so darn good at it! I just love seeing her falter under Vegeta's false pretenses. Hope next update comes soon, with all that happened this chapter! Very enjoyable read :) |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 03, 2003 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I L0VE THIS STORY |
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