| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: seirra On: May 04, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update plz!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 05, 2002 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMG!! I'm so happy for Bulma and Koru that I have tears in my eyes. I could feel their joy at having been cured as well as Vegeta's relief that Bulma will live. Also I could feel her sadness of having to give up the Roctorns. Will she leave Spider too? I hope not. I can picture him on Earth causing all kinds of mischief ^_^. The last scene between Bulma and Vegeta was nothing short of beautiful. Her doubts and his reaffirmation that he is not Yamcha and what he will be to her and do for her almost had me crying. Incredible chapter!! You know I almost missed this update because it didn't show up on the dbz new fics page. Back in late July MMO crashed so alot of authors had to repost their stories again. What you have to do is go back and repost your story (especially the last 2 chaps) under DBZ and it will appear in the new fics page. Again, Kudos for brightening up my day with this update and I can't wait for the next one (or is it the last chapter?). Anyway, if you develop writer's block with this story then take you're time. This is one of those fics where the results are worth the wait ^_^. Take care and Peace. |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO CHI-CHI! Tellin' it to Yamucha! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Poor Vegeta and Bulma. But they got a lot of time now to work out their issues. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 29, 2002 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. You captured Veggie's frustrations and Bulma's pain perfectly. I just hope that she starts to get her strength back and get cured real soon. |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 07:10 CDT
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aaak! don't scare me like that! I thought you were about to kill off spider for good. *wipes of forehead* please, please, no more nasty surprises. I can't take them any more. I love this story! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 24, 2002 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AND THE OSCAR GOES TO...CHICHI SON!!! *Reviewers clap, yell, go crazy, do cartwheels*. Yeah you tell him! Man, she went up one side of that jerk and down the other (and she had an audience too ^_^). I can't wait to see how Yamcha will react when Bulma returns (hopefully with a bun in the oven ^_~), totally cured and happy with Veggie, and I hope she kisses her saiyan prince right in front of Yamcha. I pray that the disease hasn't made her barren. What a heartbreaker that would be. Awesome chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 25, 2002 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta love those tender B/V moments. Bulma is so lucky to a man like Veggie in her life. That goes double for Spider. That was an incredible thing he did to save Bulma. I love him to pieces ^_^. Great chap. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, more sweetness! And boy oh boy, I hope he doesn't screw up that second Psytrim!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 22, 2002 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like Koru and Bulma celebrated themselves right into a hangover. They had every right to. Good chapter ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!YES!YES! Bulma and Koru are going to be healed. Man that's great news. Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 10:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Vegeta blowin razberrys?! Very OOC but funny none the less. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a sweet filler. Spider and Ghost are recouperating nicely. K/A finally got together ^_~, Bulma was feeling better and Vegita was being so loving and attentive. Good chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey glad you're back! Great update too-Spider and Ghost are back, even though it looks like Spider isn't doing very well. Poor Bulma, the disease seems to be progressing faster. I just hope she can hang in there long enough to get the cure. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: July 21, 2002 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggle* What I wouldn't give to be Bulma at that moment! Lol. Great chapter! Poor roctorns, being all alone all day! But oi! Where the heck are Spider and Ghost?!?!? They need to find them sooooon! Oh, and your other fic, I'll make sure to take a look at it soon, but I don't have time now! Gotsta go get my mountain of hair chopped off! |
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