| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 30, 2002 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. At least now Koru will be at peace knowing that her sis was given a proper burial. I hope Spider recovers as well as Bulma. Judging by Veggie's anger I have a feeling that Tajil's days, or should I say minutes, are numbered. Good riddance!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 28, 2002 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Koru's story has left me teary eyed. I can't believe how she and her sister were treated. I hope that somehow she is able to avenge her sister's death and also get even with Treskor. On a lighter note, I can't wait to see B/V get together for real (^_~). Update soon ok? |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 26, 2002 20:02 CDT
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Agh! I was really worried there for a minute, about Bulma! I'm glad she's okay though, and I'm terribly glad that Vegeta didn't have the heart to kill her! That would have been very sad...And that little playfight scene with them was very cute!
But what's with Strifelon and Onyx? Why are they so tense around eachother, and why does Strifelon try to hide Onyx away??? |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 22, 2002 14:32 CDT
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That is so sad!!!!!!!!!! The plant must grow faster,Damn it!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?!?!?!?!!? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 22, 2002 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG how sad!!! Bulma must be in some major pain if she wants Veggie to put her out of her misery. I was hoping that he would so she could be wished back. You can make this fic as sad as all get out, but I've come this far and I'm not gonna stop reading it now. Update soon, ok? |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad! Oh, I hope the plant grows back real soon! |
Reviewed By: DBZ gurl On: April 19, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Vegeta gurl On: April 19, 2002 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: louie On: April 19, 2002 14:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (LOL)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!????????? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 19, 2002 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Still sad though. I hope the potions work and keep Bulma from dying. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 21, 2002 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
AGHHH!!! Bulma better not die before the new plant grows!!! Aghh!!!! I wanna know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: April 16, 2002 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... I wish the overall rating score could go higher, because this deserves more than a 10. :\
I'm still teary eyed. (;_;) (Um, that's supposed to be a crying face... Not a very good one though.) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Bulma can't die!!. They've been thru so much already to come this far, it's just not fair. I'm depressed, can't write anymore. |
Reviewed By: gal On: April 15, 2002 23:12 CDT
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my only question--couldn't he have flown them there instead of walking though the mud? Otherwise I'm enjoying the fic :) |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 21:25 CDT
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WHAT!???!!! DIe?! No! that can't happen... oh this is such a sad fic... |
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