| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegeta Gurl On: June 15, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiing for the update your story rocks!!!!!!!!!!! please PLEASE update .Your writers block is gone SO START WRITING! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 05, 2002 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cute! especially what vegeta said at the end of the last chapter. i was beinning to wonder if bulma was still sick, but now i'm reassured. she just seemed so healthy after being really sick for so long. good stuff. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 05, 2002 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good filler chap. I'm glad Koru and the other women are being treated for their sickness, and they way Veggie and Bulma are interacting in the forest. Update soon ok? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 05, 2002 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you're such a tease! For a moment there I thought we were gonna be treated to a lemon. Looks like you plan to drag it out and drive us crazy. At least they've decided to go out and look for Spider and Ghost. I can't believe I missed this update a couple of days ago, but hey! better late than never ^_^. |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 02, 2002 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 02, 2002 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
HA HA! VEGETA CLEANED UP THE SHIT! HA! that's what he gets for never lifting a finger to clean before. good chap! kind of uneventful, but i'm sure you have your reasons. anyway, i checked out your website, and it's COOL! i'll write you an e-mail for that later. but right now i'm running on about 4 hours of sleep and i don't know for how long i'll be coherent. YOU ARE SPIIFFY COOL!
ME-MEEP! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: June 02, 2002 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh heh heh...I can just see all those Roctorns making a mess of the ship...*giggle* And I can totally see them slinking along the ground on her belly...My dog used to do that when she was younger, before she realized we weren't going to hurt her if she was bad (we got her from the pound, scared shitless of everything. It was sad...)
Anyway, YAY!!! I'm glad Ghost isn't going to die! Spider saved him! How cute!!!! Great chapter! I'd write more, but I'm in a bit of a hurry! Can't wait till the next update! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeay! Ghost is alright! I doubt that any sort of a box will be able to contain those roctunes though. Very funny chapter. By the way, wasn't Vegeta promising Bulma something in the forest before they went to see Koru a few chapters back. (hint hint) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 02, 2002 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny chapter. What I would've given to see the look on Veggie's face when he walked into that mess-lol. Frankly, I think he and Bulma took it rather well. And Hurray! Ghost is alive thanks to Spider. |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 01, 2002 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!! This is getting great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2002 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor little Rockturns (Is that how you spell it?)
Aw, I hope Spider gets to go with Vegeta and Bulma though! Please. |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why, OH, WHY must you stop?! This is too good! Please, please keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: masamune On: May 14, 2002 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was brilliant. i love that 'i'm going to brutally disembowl you now' scowl. i'm sure i've given it to a few people on a number of occasions. and when bulma said, "i want you to screw my brains out," i couldn't stop laughing. i know someone who said that before.
this chap was incredibly amusing on many levels. i can't wait to find out if he takes her up on the offer, or if poor Ghost will live. he can't die! he's too cute! oh well, i'll shut up now... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 14, 2002 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it looks like Spider is gonna make it (wish I could say the same for Ghost). Arden and Koru seem to be getting closer as well as B/V. I just wish a cure would be found to help Bulma and Koru. As always, another great update ^_^. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: May 13, 2002 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
EEEE!!! I've got this huge grin on my face right now...You should see it! *giggle* Koru and Arden are going to get together, aren't they? That would be soooo cute!!!
And Spider better be okay!!!! I like him too much!!! And Ghost...where did he go? Didn't he like, find a hole in the dungeons or something and dissapear? Or maybe I missed something...oi...
Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!!! |
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