| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 03, 2002 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe this chap put tears in my eyes. Bulma's dying, she knows it. Her inner turmoil is heartbreaking. At least she has friends that love her, and a certain saiyan prince that is willing to go to another planet for the cure. If he succeeds he'll end up getting everyone's respect, even Yamucha. Please update when you can. This fic is great. Peace |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 03, 2002 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh ho ho! A Vegeta Yamcha fight scene, eh? I LOVE those! All B/V's should have some pathetic weakling bashing. i really like this story! Please continue! I'm reading every word! Poor Veg, so confused! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 03, 2002 10:35 CST
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Oohh! This gets better all the time! And I really like the way you've been showing Vegeta's inner conflict about helping Bulma. It allows him to take on the role of the hero without being ooc! You're doing a really really great job on this and I totally can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 03, 2002 10:23 CST
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Oh geez, I was reading this, just shocked, with my eyes glued to the screen! I'm off to read the next chapter, real quick! Great start!!! |
Reviewed By: JenJen On: April 02, 2002 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing Fanfic. I love the plot line and I think you've really got all the characters down pat, especially my two favorite and main people in your story. PLEASE! When you make more, could you contact me so I can read it? bubblebabyboo@hotmail.com is my addy. Thank you and keep writing! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 01, 2002 14:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic!!!!!!??????? It is realy interesting and getting ausome!!!??? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 01, 2002 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. I'm happy Veggie has decided to help Bulma. I just hope he can get the plant and return in time to save her. I'm really enjoying this fic and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. Very well written. I hope Veggie can help Bulma recover from this illness. Please write more when you can. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 24, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap and I can't believe that you've got 37 more waiting in the wings!!. Looks like Bulma's feeling much better thanks to father and son. And B/V kissed-(sighs). I hope things improve between those and stay that way (yeah right). |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 06, 2002 08:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left it at a clif hanger!!!!!!!! This is getting better and better every chapter that u write!!!!!!!!!!!Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: May 17, 2002 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's this business about Ghost being dead within the hour????? How could you be so cruel??? AGHH!!! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: April 24, 2002 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is unbelievably good and incredibly original! i've never read a b/v fic like this one. this is awesome! i love it i REALLY hope you post another chapter soon, as your schedule allows. i understand you must be busy right now, i'm in the same process of preparing to finish this excrutiatingly long, last year of school.
i just wanted to mention that the only thing i really noticed wrong with your fic (and it's not even big) is that you spell minute wrong; you often spell it minuet, which is a word, but not the one you're thinking of. just thought to let you know!
I LOVE your story! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. I had no idea that Bulma was going to go with him. That really shocked me. Keep up the good work!!! Bye |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad, it made my eyes water. I could actually believe Vegeta crying. Good job, bye-bye |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Superb, as always. |
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