"Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 15, 2002 15:37 CDT Comment/Review: "Don't listen to me" *giggle* That's so funny...reminds me of a friend of mine...And that little scene with the lightning, with all ten roctorns crowding into the room and oh, so cute! I want to know what they look like in your ideas...because in my head, even with the description, they look like this big furry dog I saw at the pound once...You should draw a roctorn! Spider! You should draw him!!!
Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! I hope you grad commitments don't hold you back too much! *giggle* But, seeing as it's your grad, make sure your fic writing doesn't hold you back from that too much! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 00:25 CDT Comment/Review: Awsome Story, Awsome chapter. I can't wait to read more. Great Job. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 14, 2002 23:27 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome update. I can't believe that Strifelon wasn't taken seriously by the rest of the Storkrins. I hope the plant survives, for Bulma's sake. I love the way everyone acted during the storm: frazzeled nerves, tails between legs and growling (sounds like my house ^_^). I see you're quite busy, so update when you can. Peace |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 23:27 CDT Comment/Review: What's gonna happen? WIll the storm knock out the Pystim. (Sorry I forgot how to spell it)Scary, what if Bulma dies. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 23:26 CDT Comment/Review: oh i love reading this, i absolutly love it, and im gald that you update it so frequently. keep it up coz i lvoe it |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 14, 2002 10:24 CDT Comment/Review: Aww! I like Spider! He's so cute!!! Like a big puppy...kinda reminds my of my dog Mojo...*giggle* Great stuff, as usual, and that little bathtub interlude with Bulma and Vegeta was adorable! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 14, 2002 03:39 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chap. It's amazing how Spider grew over night. He might as well be a watchdog since he's as big as one. I feel so sorry for Koru. I wish it were possible for Bulma to come up with a way to increase the number of plants. Can't wait for the next chap. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 14, 2002 03:26 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome!! I just love the Roctorns, Spider and Ghost. I'm laughing just visualizing Spider in Vegeta's hair. Strifelon's enthusiasm was so refreshing and I'm so happy Bulma will finally get better. Most of all it seems like B/V have finally come to their senses. Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 13, 2002 17:48 CDT Comment/Review: Update!!!!!!!!!! This fic is the best so fare!!!!!!!!! I love spider!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 12, 2002 14:30 CDT Comment/Review: Ausome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 12, 2002 14:05 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really give this chapter a 20. Tender loving care seemed to be the theme here: Veggie taking a liking to the Roctom and giving it a name, Bulma cleaning his wounds, Vegeta helping her with the "little shits" on the way to see Strifelon and the way the guru told Bulma that Veggie cares for her. That should've answered the question she had back at the ship. Yeah Veggie has changed and it's all because of her. Great story. Btw if you want to write a fic about Koru, feel free. I'll read it. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 11, 2002 17:05 CDT Comment/Review: Awww...the poor Mommy Roctorn...But it's good that Vegeta's letting Bulma take care of 'em! And wow...now they have ten pets! *giggle* |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 11, 2002 14:39 CDT Comment/Review: Update!!!!!!!!!! That was so cute!!!!!!!!!!!. Update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 11, 2002 01:30 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter. That's our Bulma. There is no way she could leave the little orphans behind. I'm glad that Ghost was found. Cute-he thinks Bulma is his "mommy". |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2002 22:35 CDT Comment/Review: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was so cute! I thin Veggie and BUlma will take all the roctorns and Ghost back to Earth! |
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