| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: vegeta gurl On: May 13, 2002 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the stories graet!!!!!!!I just love it.the part with where vegeta says Bulma likes the "bad boy type" was pure genius.but hey try to break from your work or studies to work on the story. You know what your stories are so good I get up at 3:00 or 4:00 in the morning to read the story when it gets updated even on school nights and I in 5 th grade. hope you like this review, Vegeta gurl |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 12, 2002 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! excellent, yet again, not that i expected less. your incredible nack for detail always astounds me!!
update as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 12, 2002 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I just hope that Spider survives, and that Koru and Arden become a couple. He seems to be quite taken with her and maybe with his support the other Rhaksins will welcome her and the other women back into their society. Good job! |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 11, 2002 18:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
SPIDER had better live DAMN IT!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is turning out better then expected!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: May 08, 2002 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 1 through 26 without taking a break!! You must write more! it's almost 4am here, and i wish there was more for me to read! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 07, 2002 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh,that was sooo good! I'm glad that Arden is the king now, he seems so much better than Treskor! And yay! The bastard is dead! Beautiful work, as always. I love it. I hope Koru ends up with Arden, too.
Please put out more soon, as your schedule allows. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: May 07, 2002 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eeee! I'm so happy! Koru is coming out!!!
But oh...oh...poor Spider! If he dies...Oh, if he dies, I'll be so sad! I'll be so mad at you Jesa!!! *giggle*
But really, I don't want him to die! I like Spider! He reminds me of my own dogs and I'll be sad if he dies!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
You've got the best ending lines. I am glad that she could set free. What a horrible death for the two. So Vegeta can fly? Great!!! Keep up the good work and update. Whippee |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 06, 2002 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME!!! I'm so happy that Bulma's fine, Treskor is dead and Koru can be free (if she wants). Now all you have to do is make sure that Spider lives and all your readers will be happy as all get out. Please don't let Spider die, and update soon ok? |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2002 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh and... LET SPIDER BE ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the last chapters where the readers saw Yamucha you made it seem like he's the one that people should take pity on. When really it's his fault that Bulma left him. |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 05, 2002 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO COOL!!!!! Spider had bettor not DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U MUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: May 03, 2002 11:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh! Being beat on can't be good for the fortrices!!!! And poor Spider!! Will he be okay??? I sure hope so! And I hope Vegeta kills that bastard Storkin! He deserves to die after beating on Bulma and Spider like that! Aggh! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: May 03, 2002 11:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooohhh...poor Koru!!! I feel sooo bad for her! That's so terrible! Damn Treksor! Vegeta should kick him in the head! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: April 30, 2002 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! and you updated on my birthday, too, how sweet!
I love the way your story is going. i can't believe you're going to write 60 chapters! that's incredible! i hope you do! PLEASE continue this story is one of my all-time favs now! |
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