| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 07, 2002 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! I love the verbal exchange between B/V regarding her new little pet, and the way Bulma wasn't putting up with any crap the Storkins were dishing out. I bet that other bowl is for Koru. That's our Bulma!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 07, 2002 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I cried and I laughed. I could feel both Bulma and Koru's pain and sadness. I'm glad they see each other as friends. Bulma wanting to play Hide and Seek with Veggie was funny. I played it out in my mind and I started laughing imagining him looking for her. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 06, 2002 15:39 CST
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Update, update, update, update, update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is getting great!!!!!!!! I am totaly hooked!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 06, 2002 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Bulma has got to be the nosiest person in the universe. Veggie's pissed off b/c she gone off on her own to do what he told her not to do, and know I'm fear her life may be in danger. I can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: April 06, 2002 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you and your cliffhangers! lol
What the fuck is up with the women in the dungeons though? I'm very curious now. Write more, soon! Please? *big puppy-dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 05, 2002 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you update like every 5 minutes. Your description of the Storkins gave me the creeps and I really enjoyed the last scene between V/B. I give the whole chap an A+. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 05, 2002 12:27 CST
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This is great! I hope the storkins or what ever dont hurt or rape Bulma that would be realy sad!! Continue and update ASAP |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 05, 2002 11:07 CST
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oooh...nice mental picture there...the sheets riding so low they barely covered a thing...*giggle* mmm...Vegeta...
Great chapter though! And I really like how you're developing this disease, what with the black spots and stuff...
And oi! A whole month!!! Agh!
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 10:16 CST
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I know it's cliche, but I hope you contiue this story! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 05, 2002 08:08 CST
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Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats All I can say!!! Update this Ausome story ASAP!!! This is a very well done story!!!!!ceap up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 05, 2002 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Veggie knew all along that Bulma was in the ship. Interesting. I love the way he took care of her when the spots showed up. I think love will bloom during this trip. Write more, great story. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 05, 2002 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright!! Bulma's a stowaway! Oh man, Veggie is gonna be one pissed off saiyan. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 04, 2002 19:20 CST
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Please update ASAP!!! This is realy getting interesting !! What an interesting twist at the end!!!! Great job!!! Continue with the great, Ausome, Spectacular job!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 04, 2002 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL-funny chap. The lobster scene was rich as well as Vegeta's encounter with Jethro, or whatever his name is. So he's leaving in the next chapter, I sure hope everything goes as planned. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 03, 2002 20:10 CST
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Please Update ASAP!!! This is turning out better then I expected!!!! Ceap up the Ausome work!!!!!! |
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