| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 03, 2002 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh ho ho! A Vegeta Yamcha fight scene, eh? I LOVE those! All B/V's should have some pathetic weakling bashing. i really like this story! Please continue! I'm reading every word! Poor Veg, so confused! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 03, 2002 10:35 CST
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Oohh! This gets better all the time! And I really like the way you've been showing Vegeta's inner conflict about helping Bulma. It allows him to take on the role of the hero without being ooc! You're doing a really really great job on this and I totally can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 03, 2002 10:23 CST
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Oh geez, I was reading this, just shocked, with my eyes glued to the screen! I'm off to read the next chapter, real quick! Great start!!! |
Reviewed By: JenJen On: April 02, 2002 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing Fanfic. I love the plot line and I think you've really got all the characters down pat, especially my two favorite and main people in your story. PLEASE! When you make more, could you contact me so I can read it? bubblebabyboo@hotmail.com is my addy. Thank you and keep writing! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 01, 2002 14:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic!!!!!!??????? It is realy interesting and getting ausome!!!??? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 01, 2002 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. I'm happy Veggie has decided to help Bulma. I just hope he can get the plant and return in time to save her. I'm really enjoying this fic and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. Very well written. I hope Veggie can help Bulma recover from this illness. Please write more when you can. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 24, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap and I can't believe that you've got 37 more waiting in the wings!!. Looks like Bulma's feeling much better thanks to father and son. And B/V kissed-(sighs). I hope things improve between those and stay that way (yeah right). |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 06, 2002 08:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left it at a clif hanger!!!!!!!! This is getting better and better every chapter that u write!!!!!!!!!!!Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: May 17, 2002 17:01 CDT
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What's this business about Ghost being dead within the hour????? How could you be so cruel??? AGHH!!! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: April 24, 2002 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is unbelievably good and incredibly original! i've never read a b/v fic like this one. this is awesome! i love it i REALLY hope you post another chapter soon, as your schedule allows. i understand you must be busy right now, i'm in the same process of preparing to finish this excrutiatingly long, last year of school.
i just wanted to mention that the only thing i really noticed wrong with your fic (and it's not even big) is that you spell minute wrong; you often spell it minuet, which is a word, but not the one you're thinking of. just thought to let you know!
I LOVE your story! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. I had no idea that Bulma was going to go with him. That really shocked me. Keep up the good work!!! Bye |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad, it made my eyes water. I could actually believe Vegeta crying. Good job, bye-bye |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Superb, as always. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor poor poor Spider. Lucky ol' Koru, is she and Arden going to get together? Don't tell me. You'll ruin the suprise.
That's what those dugeons get. I am glad Vegeta's going to blow-im up. They need that. Any ways it was great, as always, and I can't wait to the next chapter. |
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