| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 07, 2002 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I cried and I laughed. I could feel both Bulma and Koru's pain and sadness. I'm glad they see each other as friends. Bulma wanting to play Hide and Seek with Veggie was funny. I played it out in my mind and I started laughing imagining him looking for her. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 06, 2002 15:39 CST
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Update, update, update, update, update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is getting great!!!!!!!! I am totaly hooked!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 06, 2002 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Bulma has got to be the nosiest person in the universe. Veggie's pissed off b/c she gone off on her own to do what he told her not to do, and know I'm fear her life may be in danger. I can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: April 06, 2002 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you and your cliffhangers! lol
What the fuck is up with the women in the dungeons though? I'm very curious now. Write more, soon! Please? *big puppy-dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 05, 2002 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you update like every 5 minutes. Your description of the Storkins gave me the creeps and I really enjoyed the last scene between V/B. I give the whole chap an A+. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 05, 2002 12:27 CST
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This is great! I hope the storkins or what ever dont hurt or rape Bulma that would be realy sad!! Continue and update ASAP |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: April 05, 2002 11:07 CST
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oooh...nice mental picture there...the sheets riding so low they barely covered a thing...*giggle* mmm...Vegeta...
Great chapter though! And I really like how you're developing this disease, what with the black spots and stuff...
And oi! A whole month!!! Agh!
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 10:16 CST
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I know it's cliche, but I hope you contiue this story! |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 05, 2002 08:08 CST
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Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue, Continue, continue,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats All I can say!!! Update this Ausome story ASAP!!! This is a very well done story!!!!!ceap up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 05, 2002 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Veggie knew all along that Bulma was in the ship. Interesting. I love the way he took care of her when the spots showed up. I think love will bloom during this trip. Write more, great story. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 05, 2002 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright!! Bulma's a stowaway! Oh man, Veggie is gonna be one pissed off saiyan. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 04, 2002 19:20 CST
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Please update ASAP!!! This is realy getting interesting !! What an interesting twist at the end!!!! Great job!!! Continue with the great, Ausome, Spectacular job!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 04, 2002 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL-funny chap. The lobster scene was rich as well as Vegeta's encounter with Jethro, or whatever his name is. So he's leaving in the next chapter, I sure hope everything goes as planned. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: louie On: April 03, 2002 20:10 CST
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Please Update ASAP!!! This is turning out better then I expected!!!! Ceap up the Ausome work!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 03, 2002 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe this chap put tears in my eyes. Bulma's dying, she knows it. Her inner turmoil is heartbreaking. At least she has friends that love her, and a certain saiyan prince that is willing to go to another planet for the cure. If he succeeds he'll end up getting everyone's respect, even Yamucha. Please update when you can. This fic is great. Peace |
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