| "Time enough to be with you" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: July 21, 2002 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oi! I lost track of fanfiction for a while there...but WHOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Lemon lemon!!! Whoo! *giggle* |
Reviewed By: anime_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
STUPID FF.NET!! I was in the middle of this story when it shut down. SHIT!! good thing I found it on this site! I still love the story. You are very talented in writing. |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
must be a dancing fool tonight, doing the happy dance again, God I love Metallica!! I am so-o glad you squeezed out another chapter, and such a good one too!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 08, 2002 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Veggie walked in on Koru and Arden ^_~. Yup, you don't have to have a phd to figure out what they were doing. Through all this, where are Spider and Ghost?? I hope they're still alive. Can't wait to see what happens at the shower. |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 00:32 CDT
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Another AMAZING chappie! Makes Cosmo happy! ;) Keep up the great work! ~ Majin Cosmo |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 17:31 CDT
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*eyes popping out of head, tounge hanging out of gaping mouth* THAT WAS THE BEST EVER!!! I SO LOVE IT! THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 23:40 CDT
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Geezes, it's about time!!^^ GOOD JOB!! I luv this fic!! It's on my favourite list on ff.net Hey, like in the wayyyyyyy earlier chapters...like....remember those magazines in Vegeta's closest...well...were they porn? For some reason that hasn't left my head! :S Whatever...CONTINUE SOON!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 06, 2002 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI. THAT WAS WONDERFUL!! Certainly worth waiting for. I loved the way you described what Veggie was feeling before ha made Bulma his mate. And of course the lemon was...well let's just say I need a cold one, and I'm not talking about a beer either. Great job!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 26, 2002 13:09 CDT
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ha! that's what he gets, eating berries before checking them out. i love the title of the chapter too. it's hilarious. |
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!! MORE MORE NOW! longer chapter! or a whole bunch of short ones now k? hehe |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 24, 2002 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 24, 2002 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, this was not a shitty chapter. I actually enjoyed reading about Veggie's tummy ache. I didn't think anything he ate would come back to haunt him. This was original ^_^. Update when you can ok? |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 11:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!! MORE MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent stroy!!! The intimate B/V moments are great! Every time I think a lemon scene is going to take place, something comes up!! Update soon |
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