| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 09:18 CDT
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I love this story! this chapter was really good. im so glad morio decided not to give up just yet and that meara said she would go out with him. i can't wait to see what happens next! please update soon!
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Sue, I love ALL of these characters. Poor Meara, how predijuce can ruin a love that is to be. Well I think I fell in love with this story when I read the first chapter. Now that I have read just 3 chapters, I am definitely head over heels in love with this story that is part of your purity continuation stories. Really well written and thanks for this beautiful fairy tale love story. J
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has made me wanting for me (like your other stories). The part where "even his eyes seemed to shut down" was so depressing. But... Depressing = Inspiring. So, I love it.
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe she would actually drop him like that. Meara you idiot!!! I mean, you can tell that she likes him. I think that Morio knows that Meara likes him.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 18:32 CDT
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NOOOoooo!!!!! How can Meara do that to Morio?! I feel so bad for the man. He really didn't deserve that. Meara better call him & beg forgiveness for being a b*tch. Morio should make HER sing "you are my sunshine"(or some equally dopey, humialiating song) to him in front of thousands of people. Millions even. And while she's at it she needs to tell her father to shove it.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Meara is a total bitch, pure and simple. I can't say I feel sorry for her at all. It's one thing to to not want someone, but she could at least be nice to him. I feel so awful for him, he's going to be so hurt. What a depressing chapter. Despite my now depressive mood I think this is a great story your writing is fabulous as always and I desperately hope that you continue on with this because I'll be here reading it! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 17:12 CDT
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Aww, the ending is so sad! Poor Morio! I'm glad he beat the crap out of that Paul guy though, he deserved it!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 12:04 CDT
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this was a really good chapter. it was so sad it made me want to cry. i feel bad for morio. i say that meara should just forget her dad and follow her inner youkai and just be with morio! (though i already know that they end up being together because of purity 7. i just want to see how they get together.) please update soon!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 10:01 CDT
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=[ Awe. Poor Morio. He was rejected. I hope Meara relises what this can do to him...
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to read another one of your chapters. I can't wait to find out how these two lovebirds end up together. I think Morio would wait for Meara for as long as need. He would understand why she needs to be their for her sister. Boy, her father sounds like a real jerk. I suprise he got away with talking like that to Fluffy (I can never spell his name right). He taken off heads for less. It sounds like Paul got exactly what he deserved (well, maybe not enough of it). Thank you for posting another terrific chapter and I will see you next time.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 00:05 CDT
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Morio is just adorable! Meara doesn't know what she's missing, well, she's starting to now... Anyway, what kind of youkai is Meara, and her dad? By the way, Iona (did I spell that right?) is such a nice girl! She deserves someone, too!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe. That was cute. I love Morio. Kinda reminds me of his father. Great chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 02:16 CDT
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That was a really cute chapter. I hope by the coffee and number thing means that Merea is coming around lol.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 01:05 CDT
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I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!! SOOOOO CUUUTTTEEEE!!!!! I could totally picture that whole thing and i was cracking up! i think she should buy him a guitar... he's too manly to have a ukulele, lmao. GREAT WORK SUE!!! can't wait for more!
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