| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Title: THANK YOU!
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 20:36 CDT
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again, another great story! and i did that, thank you. I read once of your stories each month (since they are so big!) so when i couldn't find the guardian, i was upset cuz i love that story...i can't wait to read P7..sounds like another good one..hope you feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 15:34 CDT
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that is so sad. RAPE! unbelievable. however despite the contents of this chapter it does not over shadow your talent. another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 15:20 CDT
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How disgusting- that a father would do that to his own child... Prejudices DO run deep...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 12:33 CDT
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i hope this lets me review for a change...i love your works..as u know, i have been following you since "torrent" and i have read every single one of your inuyasha fics...and i have to say..you just keep getting better and better..keep up the amazing work..btw, i cant find the guardian anywhere...did u delete it? tessie
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Title: Wheee!!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down* Yeah! Another chapter from the infamous Sue! *remembers she probably shouldn't jump up and down at work* Thanks for the new chapter. My day is now complete. :)
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 10:10 CDT
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I feel so sad for Meara. I can't believe her father said that. And to think he actually meant it. It's horrible. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 01:12 CDT
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I can't believe Meara's father said that; it seems low even for him. I hope things for them will get better soon.
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 23:04 CDT
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I'm a little confused. The year in this newest chapter is 2063, but the year in the ones before is 2062.... is it really just over a year later, or is that just a typo? either way, very good chapter. I felt so bad for Morio, and how the two of the finally became mates. I really hope taht everything works out for them.
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Reviewed By: shadowyrain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ian just makes me mad just soooo mad for doing that to Maera. if he was close (and real) to me I'd slap him silly even if he is the tai-yokai (sorry if I spelled that wrong cause I can't seem to spell anything today). really good chapter too I love your stories ^_^ keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sorrowful chapter. It just seems like nothing can go right for these two. I am horrified that Maera's father would practically tell he'd force her against her will to mate...he must be the devil incarnate. Despite her pain, I think I feel even worse for Morio. Nothing he can do seems to make her happy, she withdraws from the other person who cares for her, and then forces him into a situation where he has to mate her. Perhaps she is in too much pain to realize that she is going to give him more heart break and pain than he may be able to cope with. I understand why she asked it of him, but wow, that was a lot of her to ask him. Painful...
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Reviewed By: Shinzen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thats just... Wow. Completely speechless. Her father is a real bastard. I hope he gets his.
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: FriskyPixie777 On: August 27, 2006 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! I just wanted you to know that I've been waiting on an update for forever Lol. Great job.
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Reviewed By: mseryel2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 18:58 CDT
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wow, good job on this chapter! i cant wait to see what happens after all this! youre building quite a dramatic arc in this purity short; and i love you for it!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry long time no review bee busy to read but what i have read is fantastic. Your wroks of writing have become better and better over time cant wait to see whats gonna/going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't believe this...unacceptable, how could any man do that to his daughter. this chapter really touched me...because my father has never been around so to read that someone would so carelessly disregard their family for making a choice to love is really (pardon my language) FUCKED UP. never the less it was a great chapter and excellent writing. i feeel horrible for poor aislynn but i cant help but feel like shell be okay...(a call from sesshoumaru...THE REAL SUPREME TAI YOUKAI should straighten ian out) i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope it all works out butr judging from purity 6 it did. ;D sorry i havent reviewed in so long i've only had tim eto print out the stories and read them on my way to work...being 17 is hard its one huge transitional time for me. lol. but you are not forgotten. i love your stories and i never miss a chance to read them i even reread them my favorite is purity 3 then 4 then 1...i love them all! lol. Naruto is hilarious i set a timer to record it because i dont get to watch it at home on the days i work. Happy Writing and update soon...you make a boring day interesting for me
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