| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Considering the state of Meara's family it's amazing she grew up sane and and stable. You've done a great job in explaining why Meara would not just run off with her love and leave her little sister in that house. Although Aislynn is not being physically abused, growing up in without the love of parents and the comfort of family and friends is an abusive situation.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 15:09 CDT
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I feel sorry for Alesia; I'd go mad to if I was mated to a guy like Ian though lol; it's still said though.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a lonely, sad chapter. Poor little Aislynn...so sweet and beautiful in such a cold, dark place. Alesia's condition is so incredibly sad. To be confined in solitude and forget her children seems to be one of the worst possible sentences in life. I hope Maera and Morio's strength together can help the lonesome lives of Alesia and Aislynn. Beautiful chappie though, Thanks.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 10:30 CDT
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Great chapter! It's really sad about Meara's mom. I wonder how she became like that, so lost in her mind and not even know who her daughters are. I hope everything works out for the better.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 00:16 CDT
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It's so sad, a madness so deep as that. To not even know her own daughters as they are... A life spent in hiding is one never lived at all.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great update to a wonderful story. Thank you much for sharing your writing with us. And update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: Shiarra [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aislynn is so cute I love this story more and more
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: August 12, 2006 02:09 CDT
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Aislynn is just too adorable! I want her all too myself. It would be great if they could just take her away from the evil ogre that passes for her father.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 23:32 CDT
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That's so sweet. I'm glad Aislyyn warmed up to him. ^_^ Poor thing, she'll be so lonely when Maera and Morio leave....
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Reviewed By: evloner On: August 11, 2006 23:23 CDT
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I just love this series. I started reading the first purity and have just continued on for the past week. I am hooked. Thank you for giving us readers this gift of purity. You are so imaginative and your characters are truly believable. You are such a fantastic writer, are you a professional? I'm one of those who actually read the comments at the end of stories and I noticed that you had a problem with the fanfic site. Are you still posting any stories on that site? I just want to know where I should always go to get your latest updates and new stories.
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Title: nish04
Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 17:49 CDT
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Hey! I didn't have internet for almost a month, 'cause we moved. BUT..i had a great treat waiting for me...hehe..so MANY CHAPTERS...itz like being in a candy shop! I just finished chatching up...I felt as though...P6..wasn't completed...but i had a sneak peak at P7...and again i've come to realize that there is a method to your madness..:P! I loved the wedding..and how u dedicated a part to all the couples...it really made it feel like it was a continuation! Now...i have to tell you...even thought "The Fairy Tail", is a short story...i LOVE IT! the story...the events and the circumstances...they are so realistic-- atleast to me. I just fell in love with Meara's character...i have to say...i think there two may end up being my favourite couple from the Purity series... ANYWHO....i'll stop blabbing...i need to go read P7 and Desrian...lol...gotta catch up before school starts..bye sue! have a nice day!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh such a tender moment and sweet ending to that chappie. I loved how for at least that day everything seemed so right for them...and seemingly content. Very enjoyable and I sit here in anticipation of more to come ;)
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 10:33 CDT
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Rover?! That is so cute! I love Aislynn, she's so adorable. Are Morio and Meara gonna tell her dad when he gets back? I hope so. Can't wait to see how that goes down. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 10:02 CDT
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Sorry I've been so silent lately Sue...I have been busy this past week. Ireally like Aislyyn but I couldnt help but notice that when Morio was giving her the stuffed animal...you called him Mikio. Not criticizing you at all it was just a humourous observation more like lol. Keep up the good work.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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