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| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: sadness
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first, let me say that I am sorry that you are not feeling well and I hope you get better soon. I loved your story and I agree with you that Morio and Meara are very likeable characters. As much as I loved this story, it made me sad as to see poor Aislyn waiting for a sister that won't be coming to her. I am not an emotional person and very rarely feel any emotions when reading a story. But this story made me feel a bittersweet joy, sadness, but especially a loneliness that your characters seemed to portray. I felt bad especially for Aislyn since all her toys were burned and that she would never know about the address sewn inside the stuffed toy dog. Very sad story, very beautifully written as always by you, Sue. I loved it!! I hope you will get over the writer's block soon. Until then, be well and have fun. thanks again, J.
| Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 16:39 CDT
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awe...what a sad ending, but i know that as a writer you like to keep your readers on edge and give them a reason to read on, and while they are reading on they wont ever feel like the story is getting uninteresting. although i feel like this particular story was sad in its ending i know there is more to come in later stories. [big smiles] i dont doubt your motives for a minute. i cant wait to see waits in store for avouchment...WRITE ON!
| Title: Sad..
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad ending, but no complaints. Great job once again Sueric!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Inuyashasclone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.... he burned all her toys..... wait.... what about that note.... I hope she finds them and gets out of that. Great story short or otherwise it's still good. Suspence is the best thing for stories ^_^
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 09:16 CDT
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That was a great story! I'm sad that it's over because I want to know what happens to Aislynn and does her father ever talk to Meara again. I guess these questions will be answered in the upcoming purity stories. Anyway, great job as usual. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
| Reviewed By: pionuschick isn't logged in On: August 30, 2006 07:46 CDT
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The ending was really sad--did Aislynn's message-dog get burned too? It sure seems so. I hope she's able to find Morio and Meara on her own, but I don't even pretend to know I have a clue on how this will end. It was a beautiful, albeit short story, but I like the fact that I can read it in a sitting rather than over the course of a month! I hope you get to feeling better, and I know how hard it is when your heart just isn't in it anymore. You're stronger than I am--I just left stories hanging in the middle, and you keep pushing out quality work. Bravo to you, Sue!
| Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 05:39 CDT
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Very unsuspected ending, but I can see why you stopped it there. I enjoyed reading it. =] I hope that you'll feel better soon.
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 00:39 CDT
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An unusual ending i must admit, but knowing your writing, it will connect with the other purity stories. Hope you get well, and thank you for sharing your stories, they make the world a little brighter.
| Title: thank you
Reviewed By: ronej On: August 29, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to inform you that I really enjoy reading all your stories. Especially after a bad day. Thank you for telling them and making my day seem brighter.
| Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 22:23 CDT
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I love this chapter. You're right about the ending... and I think it suits the whole story. I'm sorry to hear about your health, I hope it isn't anything too serious, and that you feel beeter soon.
| Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: August 29, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still as awesome as ever. Just a question, are U gonna let Kichiro & Bella have a son now. I notice all their kids are girls. I think Kichiro & Bella son will be as awesome as Morio. I can see that actually Morio has the softer side of Inuyasha & compassionate side of Kagome. So maybe the son of Kich & Bella will be more incline to be that. Just a thought that's all.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, great Fairy Tale...I think it was ended where it shouldve been. Well, maybe more, but ...maybe not. I'm sure, or hoping at least, that somewhere down the road, we'll all find out what, if anything, happened to Aislynn. Everything was gone that Meara had given her...or was it? As always you amaze me with your talents with the beautiful storied you write. So, until next time, Thank You for writing and sharing your works.
| Reviewed By: sweetsatisfaction [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your writing soooo much, I just wish I could write like you. But not every one can be a creative genuis such as yourself ^.^ So, just wanted to let you know, cant wait for your next update in your stories, but please, get better before anything!! I'd rather have my favorite author all happy and not sick and such rather than an update. And I hope you recieve all the passion you need to continue in your writing, it's been a pleasure reading your stuff, and i'd be heart broken if you lost all that creativeness and didnt put it down for us lowly uncreative people to read, hehe ^.^ I appreciate and respect you very much sueric, for not stopping in your writing when you get so much negativity, they're just jealous of the genius that is you. Well, I hope all turns out well in sueric land, have fun, be happy, and i give you the best of luck on getting the heart and soul back in your writing, btw, if this last chapter was part of the heart and soul thing, its still amazing, you're great w/o putting all your stuff into it, you got mad skills!!!!! Hehe, well, i guess thats all for now, but i repeat, get better before anything please!!!! Take care sueric A devoted Fan!!!!!
| Title: Fate loves me!!
Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I've tried to review on every chapter of this story and everytime it gave some crazy message, and finally this last one, it actually let's me!! Uhg!! Anyway, you did an outstanding job as always! I truely love your characters and I always seem to find myself day dreaming about them. First it was Toga and Sierra, then Ryo and Nezumi, then Gin and Cain and Kich and Belle, and then Bas and Sydney and Jillian and Gavin and now Morio and Meara And poor Asylinn. My God your talented!! I know you will get flack for the ending, but regardless I think it was beautiful, dramatic, poignant and it leaves me and I'm sure your other readers wanting more and anxiously waiting for the series to continue so the we can find out what happens to poor Asylinn. Oh and I'll tell you something else, I know Gunnar wasn't in this fic, but I can't stop thinking about him, I've kind of adopted him as my pretend boyfriend when I'm feeling lonely. I know that's sick, but your characters are so freaking believable that quite frankly he's hard to ignore. Anyway Sue, once again you did an spectacular job!!
| Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. As always.
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