| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: pionuschick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is definitely one of my favorites in the Purity series, if not #1. The way you develop characters, even in this short story (in comparison :D), is simply amazing. Wonderful job.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 02:47 CDT
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Aww, that's so cute! Looks like Meara has a little competition :D.
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Reviewed By: ca4151 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 23:12 CDT
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amazing story! i love the tension between the two love birds. absolutly amazing! keep up the great work! what am i saying! you always do great work. thanks for writing and giving your readers joy!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 10:44 CDT
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Great chapter. I so glad that Meara has finally decided to tell her dad. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 07:28 CDT
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Good, finally a plan in action. I hope everything works out for them alright.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 01:33 CDT
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Three months and counting! Hmm...I wonder if Meara will think three months will be too long as the days slowly go by lol.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rawr, I haven't been able to update. Cursed site! Anyways, I have loved the last two chappies. Swinging from the lowest of lows with Meara at home to Inuyasha proposing which was absolutely so sweet. Poor Morio I just feel so awful for him. He's trying so hard to be patient and still feel loved by Meara...sadness. I greedily await the next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 16:44 CDT
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I feel so bad for MOrio and Meara right now. Poor Morio. All he wanted to do was spend Christmas with her. I think that Meara needs to just take her sister & run. Her father's a jerk, and he'll just make her just as miserable as Meara(which is why she's in the mess she's in now). Meara should at least tell the truth. Lying to everyone is not going to make things better. In fact, I'm willing to bet that if Morio has to keep their relationship a secret for much longer he could end up getting fed up with her. Maybe. Big maybe. The man did stand outside her bedroom window singing to her even when people were throwing things at him. But even sweet guys like Morio have their limits. Gosh, I wish I had a guy like Morio!(I always end up thinking that when I read this story.)
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 10:00 CDT
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I can't believe they've gone two years without telling anyone. I hope Meara tells her father soon and by soon I mean the next day so she could spend Christmas with Morio. Great chapter. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 01:35 CDT
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I just wish someone could slap Meara's father. I wonder if Meara is going to tell him about Morio soon then.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Red Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:54 CDT
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Is that the end? It feels like it could be,and it wouldn't be that bad of an ending. Either way the story is really cute! I like it!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! Gods it is about time. I loved the post-coital coversation. I thought it was really sweet and so fully of promises and love. I really hope they are able to persevere and stay together despite the odds. Final thought from Madosie: Yes, goddamnit I am jealous, grrrrrr.
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