| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 02:02 CST
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I know what you wrote and I have seen hints in the other chapters but I can only hope, you wouldn't leave that poor little girl like that right? She'll find happiness and love? I would love to know her tale...
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Title: Love A Sequel
Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. I decided to read it again and I don't know if I reviewed it the first time. I would absolutely love to read a seuqiel, especially seeing the scene where Aislynn discovers what's under the seam in the doll. Keep up the great work and I love ALL your Purity stories.
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Title: CURIOSITY
Reviewed By: p3rv3-f3ct-o [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 07:14 CDT
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I'M JUST CURIOUS, BUT IS THERE GOING TO BE ANY FUTURE STORIES REGARDING AISLYN BECAUSE THAT WAS A REALLY SAD ENDING AND I CANNOT HELP BUT FEEL A LITTLE HOPEFUL THAT MAYBE YOU WILL WRITE ABOUT HER A LITTLE LATER ON. 8[
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Reviewed By: Ice_Sick_El [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 04:37 CST
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You know I love that your "short story" is 15 chapters long... Heh, as always you told another great story. Romantic and sweet but still leaving me wanting more... I'm curious if Aislynn managed to hide the dog, or if she'll pop up again... I hope she will... ^_^ I also wanted to mention one of the things I love about your writing is even though you always have a happy ending the characters lives still aren't prefect. In a lot of stories that I read when the sequel rolls around the first couple is deliriously happy and nothing ever goes wrong with them, but you don't let that happen and its refreshingly realistic and I thank you for it. Also I did a fanart of Gin as the Cake Faerie... ^^ its posted on this site if your interested... I took some artistic liberties and all but I still am happy with how she turned out. I look forward to more awesome stories... I'm just about to start purity 7
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just doing some back reading and I was wondering if you were going to re-visit these people again? Especially Aislynn, I really want to know what happens to her.
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Title: so sweet and sad and beautiful and deep and, oh, i need a hug and some Cherry Garcia *sniffle*
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and to THINK, i ACTUALLY SLEPT ON THIS FIC! WTH is WRONG with me! i LOURVED the tone death serenades (lmfbo!) and it was so sweet, the special, all-day long date he gave her. i just HATE her dad...and i just LOVE Aislynn ('Rover' comes to mind...and hair accessories! KAWAII!). GOD, i HOPE she hid the toy with the address in it! PLZ tell me you're making a sequel...plz plz plz plz plz, SUE! If you do, i'll be a beta and you can even put me in a cage in ur basement and i'll live off ove pocky and water! REALLY! so, whaddaya say?
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:10 CST
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You know the story's good when you prefer it over the actual show. :]
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautiful! yet sooo sad:( i hope they work things out soon in later puritys. keep up the GREAT work!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 17:51 CST
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it makes me sad to think that there is nothing that can be done to help Adlynn even though she does need help. And with all of her toys being burned, it means that all of her ways to contact her sister is cut off also. I can only hope that she is able to find her own way like her sister did. Then again, Ian could crack down on her even harder than he did with Meara. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I had been so busy that I didn't have any time to come on to Mediaminer and read this. When I finally did I came immdiately to this story. I loved reading every word of it. It was wonderful and I cant wait to read more of your writing sueric! =]
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good fic. I can't wait for you to update, but be sure to get better first! Your health should always come first. Can't wait for updates to Purity 7.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 22:41 CDT
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And what a beautiful job you did of it too. For a story I know you weren't sure you were going to write. I do love this one. I adore Morio and Meara and poor poor Aislynn. It was so worth it Sue. And I enjoyed it every step of the way!
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Reviewed By: mseryel2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ending wasnt what i expected, but it was good all the same. at least meara got to be with morio...
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed what you wrote in for this short story. It also intrigued me of were you ended it most people would have skipped ahead in months/years or even decades just to show off what happenes but you did it diffrently and that is uncome to say the least. I for one am very happy were you left off. I for one am very happy were you left off, you have always been a very unique author through out your woks and i find that ... well I cant really find a word to describe it. I also hope you are feeling better and hope for the best to you and your future writings.
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Title: always enjoyable
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okok... im NOT complaining.... im just highly upset.... give me a moment *sits there looking dumb* ok moment gone, lmao... I actually thought it was going to be longer though I think its somewhat better this way... more suspence in the up coming Purity's... just continue your magnificent writing that everyone loves and no on shall be dissapointed....and by the way i LOVE this couple Meara and Morio... I love it... well i shall write laters most likely.... cant wait to read more of of work... laters.... yasha
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