| "A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 09:20 CDT
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This chapter is so sad. I knew her dad was gonna come home early and catch them. Poor Meara, I can't imagine what it's like to have someone hate you so much. I hope everything works out for them. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 01:16 CDT
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Hmm, a lack of writing due to Naruto? Does that mean we'll be seeing some Naruto fanficts in the future? If you're taking psudo requests, I'm a big fan of Naruto/Hinata (Sakura's too... "OMG! SASUKE! *drool*" *gag*) They make such a cute couple! _> yea, I'm a man of many animes. And Jiraiya, just his entrance! It's so great.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just too painful. It's so awful that despite the fact that Maera has no warm feelings for her father that in the one moment that she begs his acceptance that he denies her existance. Poor Morio too. He is really going to have to help her recover, she's going to be a shell after having lost Aislynn like that. So depressing! Now Aislynn has no one except her precious little dog. Great chappie despite the sadness! Thanks!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering how it was all gonna go down when her father made his appearance. Wonder too, how her little sister will take it all and if she ever finds what Morio left in the stuffed dog for her. Great chapter. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: KikyoKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 22:17 CDT
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Pass me the kleenex. Yes dad is a bastard but I feel bad for Meara. She didn't get to say goodbye to her sister or mother. exucuse i must cry over ice cream
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Title: Yeah!!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 20:21 CDT
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Hey!! Thanks for the new chapter! It made my horrible day so much better... even though the chapter wasn't that happy of one. I got to meet Richard Cox (voice of IY) at ComicCon this year. He's so funny and I kept thinking of you. :) Keep up the great work! I love every word.
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Reviewed By: marmaset [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! You have me checking for updates two or three times a day. Thank you the spell-binding story!
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 18:59 CDT
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For an unbetaed (Is that even a word? XD) chapter, it was wonderfully addicting. ;D Ian acted every bit that I thought he would- even if he was overly harsh on her. I just can't help but feel so bad for poor Aislynn.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:54 CDT
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Man, I wish Morio would have inflicted more damage on Ian! I can't believe that punk, but then again I can; it is the sort of thing a person like him would do. I don't even have the words to describe how much that character angers me lol.
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Reviewed By: shadowyrain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crys* I feel for Meara and Aislynn please hurry with the next chapter I wanna know what happens *start to cry more*
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Title: Quick Question
Reviewed By: Chva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story Sue but I have one question. In Chapter 5 Morio's youkai talk's about this being his last year to get Meara, why is that? since thay both still seem to be going to college 2 years later.
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Reviewed By: ochiko (not logged in) On: August 17, 2006 18:11 CDT
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Awww... Poor Aislynn. She really is neglected, isn't she? I can see how it would be difficult to leave her alone there. In any case, great chapter! I'm really looking forward to reading the next one.
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: Inuyashasclone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another great chapter. This is my first offical review for you. Had login problems. I love your stories very much. I honestly wish you'd been the one to make the Inuyasha anime series. I hope things calm down for you. I thought you were professional your writing is just that good ^_^
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Reviewed By: shadowyrain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories all that I have read are great (I started with your chronicles then went here to the Purities) I cant wait til the next chapter :) You really are a great writer My opion is that you are alot better then some main stream authors
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I JUST CAUGHT UP ON CHAPTERS (because of school) THAT IS SO CUTE AND SAD AND ADORABLE AND SOO MANY OTHER EMTIONS -- i LOVE Aislynn she is soooo adorable, and she fell asleep in his lap too awwww
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