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"A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ]
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 Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2006 12:38 CDT
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I'm so happy for Morio and Meara! It's about time they got together. I'm sad that they have to keep it a secret though. I just hope that everything turns out okay. Great chapter! Can't wait for more. Oh, and I was just wondering if any of Morio's family is gonna show up, I would love to see that.
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2006 01:42 CDT
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Aww, this chapter was so cute! Nice and fluffy too, might I add lol. I hope that Meara's father doesn't find out about her and Morio until she see's fit to let him know.
 Reviewed By: EJA Roberts [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2006 21:52 CDT
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Yeah, meara finally realised that if you love someone, that's all that matters!!! I feel for the girl, really i do, i mean i could never do what she had to growing up. Its just. . . wrong. Anyway, great chapter, please update soon oh and your orginal fic sounds great, and its barely chap two!
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2006 18:14 CDT
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You can do this Meara! You deserve Morio! Stop worrying about defying your bangster of a father and go for Morio! Aww, I hope everything goes well.
 Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 22:28 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I loved this inner dialogue chapter. I also thought that the phone call to her mother was important because I think it may have changed her entire outlook, hopefully for the best. I LOVED the knicker comment, oooooooo, so much promise for those yellow panties! Really enjoyed the chappie, thanks!
 Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 18:09 CDT
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Poor Meara. Her father's a jerk. But Morio is so cute! I want him for myself. How is it he's so romantic when he was raised by Nez & Ryo? I can't wait for the next chapter. Meara was so funny when she was talking talking to Iona b/c she wanted an excuse to see sneak off to see Morio again.
 Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 16:37 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I have a question.... have you been around the world visiting diffrent countries and places. Cause you sure know quite abit about the details in your stories. Or did you just do some intense research or are you just guessing. Well this story is sure great very nice.
 Reviewed By: Kittycat78 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 15:10 CDT
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This story is really great. Meara and Morio are rather cute together. It's just sad that her father hates hanyou so much. I have a question though, are all the tai-youkai inu-youkai in the purity universe, or just the ones we've seen so far?
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 12:30 CDT
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Oh I do so like this. 'Tis a wonderful fairy tale.
 Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 11:21 CDT
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You always make me want to squeal when I check my e-mail and I found out that you updated. I feel bad for the loneliness that Meara felt as a child. I understand now why she didn't want to be with him at first. I can't wait till the dinner. =]
 Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 02:10 CDT
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awe. Thats sad. Tis not fair about what her dad thinks. Hanyou's not being worthy enough of Youkai's. Cant wait for the next update. =) wewt.
 Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 29, 2006 06:39 CDT
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Wow... Their date was just so romantic. I'm not surprised that Meara acred like that, but it makes it all the more interesting on how they got together.
 Title: OMG
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2006 21:02 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
SOORRYY i havent reviewed in a while but i was in boston (with no wireless)for the summer and i just caught up on the story...ahhh Morio is soo PERFECT!!! Meara needs to tell him why she thinks it cant be!! update soon!!!
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2006 19:21 CDT
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Aww, I knew she would say something like that; but it's still sad! Poor Morio and Meara.
 Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2006 18:36 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hey, I'm not sure if this was mentioned before but what kind of youkai is Meara? Also what are her and Morio's colours?
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