| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 21:22 EDT
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We finally have a connection to the prologue. I am happy to see it.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 18:55 EDT
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Hmm...Kumiko sounds really familiar...if only I could remember where lol.
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 12:22 EDT
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As always, love it! She finally got to see the basement and we finally got to meet the mystery woman!! :D
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Title: evloner
Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 11:39 EDT
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Wow, you update so fast its hard to review the last chapter before you've already put out the next. I just knew Griffin would take Bell into his basement/cave. But I admit I was hopping he just grab her and kiss her instead. Oh well this just makes it so much more romantic when he kisses her next time. Now you've given us alittle more insite into griffin's past, I wonder what is the big mystery behind his scares. I'm sure he gotten them being the hero and trying to save a village. Maybe he was able to save everyone be his own family and now carries the guilt behind not saving his kin. Great job update soon.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done, I'm so glad he's finally letting her in. And Gunnar, is seriously a nosey nelly. He better stop cheating on me!! LOL, no, really, I'm serious!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 10:35 EDT
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Great chapter! I hope Griffin tells her about his past soon. Good to see that Gunnar was in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 09:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! SO, Griffin's past is slowly unraveling.... Keep up the awesome work and update soon please because I can't wait for more!! I thought the dollhouse was a sweet idea!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:33 EDT
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he was so mean!!! he better have something good planned to cheer her up! but i still love him : ) he just needs to tell her the truth and let her make her own decisions, especially before Gunner finds out and tells her. he should be the one to tell his story! UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON! : )
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:57 EDT
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This is so good!! Do we get to see whats in the basement? Please, I can't wait!! That last chapter was too short. But you are amazing!
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: tinners [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok. so i almost cried when he yelled at her. it was so well written. you are MAGNIFICENT.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 12:52 EDT
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Great chapter! I hope that he shows her the basement. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 00:50 EDT
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I wonder if she's finally going to see what the mysterious basement holds. I'm actually surprised that Griffin was so fast to attempt to make up, but I guess the classic 'chase after your girl' scene doesn't exactly fit their style and abilities after all. In the end, Griffin's a shy bear and just, psycologically, wouldn't be able to follow her back to her parents or grandparents' house. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 19:12 EDT
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Hmm....I hope he's showing her the basement. You know, he owes her a kiss for putting her through so much distress lol. Hmm...I wonder if those people will tell Jilli that Avis is dead.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two updates in a week i feel really lucky. I love the Purity FF that you write. fantastic chapter more please ;)
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Title: dun. dun. DUN!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 18:46 EDT
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The basement!!! Wheee! She'll finally get to see the basement!!
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