| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: happilyjaded On: January 09, 2007 20:03 EST
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This was a very beautiful chapter. The way that Griffin consoles Isabelle gives us so much insight into his character. Great Job!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's all I have to say, "Just Wow". Very, very, very touching chapter.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 18:06 EST
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Aw, that's sad! Poor Isabelle, she didn't need to be called a murderer. Aw, Griffin's consoling her, that's so sweet!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:55 EST
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Oh my goodness!!! I feel so bad for Isabelle. Its horrible when you feel helpless and hopeless. I can relate. But at the same time I understand that they needed that situation to occur, because it opened up Griffin's heart more and more he could never turn his feelings around when you love someone and they hurt, they cry every fiber in your being screams for you to make it better, to ease their pain even accept their pain if possible because you love them that much. When they hurt you hurt and when they cry so do you. Griffin just proved that he'd do anything within his power to make Belle's Pain go away.
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i kno that i havent reviewed in a while but i think you should kno that i think this chapter just hit home and i was in tears before i knew what was happening...i guess its because in the past my aunt had something similar happen to her and...im going off on a tangent again...anyways GREAT chapter and you've done an amazing job on all of the other purity stories and i kno that this one will be no different!!! cant wait for yout next update and Happy (late) New Year!!
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Title: *contented sigh*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man. I swear... you get better with every chapter that you write. Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us and I can't WAIT to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 05, 2007 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work is so dependable that it makes it easy to take it all for granted. I just wanted to let you know that not only is the chapter great, but all of your chapters are great, and that how often you update, is really great. The angst in this story is really peaking. I can not imagine how Bitty and Griffin will finally rise above his past and present problems. Where will it all go from here? Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 12:56 EST
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Great chapter! I wonder what has Isabelle so upset? I was good to see Kichiro and Ryomaru in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:52 EST
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Awww I hate tears and so does griffin from Isabelle anvway. Great Chap EVIL CLIFFE! But can't wait until the next chap.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:41 EST
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One of her patients died? Or was it the baby that didn't make it? I've been reading most of your other works lately (pure boredom… don't ask…) and one of the lines in your story about Zelig's parents struck me as interesting in the fact that it was a bear youkai that saved the boy. Zelig scratched and bit him all up and down his arms and there was also a fire that night in the barn… or am I looking too far into your other stories to make any sense? Well… keep up the good work! dark
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Reviewed By: yanan On: January 05, 2007 09:29 EST
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Amazing Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: charity nicole On: January 05, 2007 02:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man u make me wanna no!!! oh well just gonna have to wait .. but its so hard!!!! lol... well evil cliffie of doom it is!!lol.. well keep it up!!! ahhh... wats wrong with bitty belle???? yea.. i have t osay these cliffies do something to the human brains i swear!!! lol good job!!! ttyl... well comment you later...
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Title: Guilt
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, that was the "Evil cliffie of doom...?" I haven't written a review on MM in a long time. It feels good to be back here though. I liked the chapter and the teaser. I was kinda hoping you would give some clue on the teaser, but I already knew the answer. I hope that someone didn't die under Isabelle's care or something happened to the pregnant lady that was mentioned earlier on. I can't wait to find out. Great writing as always and I am loving the words that you are using in your chapters. It makes your stories stand out more. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what happened to make Bitty so upset?!?! I hope Griffin can make her feel better. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fob On: January 04, 2007 19:18 EST
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Superb Chapter. Please update soon.
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