| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: evloer On: January 13, 2007 02:49 EST
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Great chapter and happy b-day!! Hey, its your birthday and we get the present. :>
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Reviewed By: Kaida18 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 02:31 EST
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Weeee! Happy Birthday, Sueric!!!!!!!! Excellent chapter, btw. lol.
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Reviewed By: AmberMae On: January 13, 2007 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! second, awesome chapter! i love Griffin's inner turmoil over the "date".. oh what has the silly bear gotten himself into.. (update soon!!)
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First and foremost Happy Birthday Mrs. Capricorn!!! I hope I'm right about the Mrs, part. Anyway excellent job as always and have a safe and happy B-day. I hope you get everything your little heart desires!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 01:49 EST
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
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Title: Happy Birthday!!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Today is my mom's birthday too! Thanks for the heart-warming chapter. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: charity - nicole On: January 13, 2007 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter... even my sister liked it.. lol.. well for the occasion hapy bithday... to u ... happy b-day 2 you .. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR SUERIC ... hApPy BiRtHdAy To YoU!!!
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Title: Purity 7
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter, and in honor of the occasion: Hippo birdy 2 ewes hippo birdy 2 ewes hippo birdy deer ewe hippo birdy 2 ewes
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 10:29 EST
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Great chapter! I had tears in my eyes when I read why Isabelle was so upset. It's so sad. I love how Griffin tried to comfort her. Please update soon!
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Title: Tears in Heaven
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great title to another well-written chapter. I had to read it twice because it was that good. I really felt sad for Isabelle. I didn't cry though but I did laugh at the way Griffin was handling the situation and the things he was saying to her. Great teaser also! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I almost started crying when I read this. I'm glad Griffin at least tried to confort her. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: January 09, 2007 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. can't wait to read the next.
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: January 09, 2007 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy! My heart is heavy after reading that. Out of misery comes comfort and understanding. These characters have become so rich. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: January 09, 2007 21:14 EST
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Wow! that was an amazing chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next :P
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Reviewed By: charity - nicole On: January 09, 2007 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.......... wow... this is a heart breaking chapter.. of all the sad tragic stoires i've read this one is the best ... i am in awe of your ability to make a character seem real enough for you to feel their pain... wow.. kepp up the good work... i feel so sorry for isabelle.. and griffin and the baby's daddy.. =( *tear*
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