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Title: Kill the B***h
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can we kill Melissa??? Just because Inuyasha doesn't want to be with her or that she thinks that Kagome is not good enough for him doesn't give her the right to make their life hell. And what about the fact that he could smeel if Kagome had been there, that the other girl lied and why doesn't he just plain fire Melissa? I would like to see Kagura do something to her and Sesshoumaru threaten her within an inch of her life should she cause any more problems for his family. He may still argue with his brother, but he is still blood and this is messing with his business. Kagome does need to stop jumping to conclussions. If she had just askied what was going on and remembered what happened before with Melissa she would have seen that something was going on. Plus if she is as smart as she claims to be then she would have stayed at least to listen to what he had to say. Maybe becuase I went through something like this with my ex-husband is the reason why I say this. I did give him time to explain himself, but the fact that he said one thing and did another lead to our divorce, but I still listened to him before I acted. Kagome needs to understand that if he waited all that time for her (500 years) then why would he wait until she graduated to mess up? And the fact that he knows she likes to drop by so often just to surprise him why would he do that on one of the most important days of her life? She really needs to talk to someone about getting her head examined. Sorry hormones going crazy, eight months pregnant and needed to blow of just a little steam.
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Reviewed By: Lzaymysticangeldust On: July 25, 2007 04:50 EDT
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Wow, wonderful! Though I'm a little scared! Inus gonna beat kagome black and blue! I hope thats just a figure of speech! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 00:13 EDT
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great chapter updates... now comes all the drama... hope that they fire melissa and make her pay along with takara... hope inuyasha finds out where kagome is from souta... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: July 25, 2007 00:07 EDT
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Oh hell no! Those bitches have to be so tortured!! I just hope someone finds out what Melissa plotted and I so hope its Kagura so she can fillet that bitch's ass into tiny sashimi pieces!! As for Takara I hope she loses all her fame and ends up as a prostitute. How dare they try to break up Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was so sad. Damn that Melissa. She should be fired. Please update soon.
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Title: InusGurl4 (not signed in)
Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:( I'm gonna cry now....That was so sad!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 21:24 EDT
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i think im really going to cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im heart broken!!!!!! *crying* please *cry/sniffle* update*cry/sniffle* soon!!!! *cries making a river* im *siffle*in *sniffle*love*snifle* with this*cry/ sniffle* story!!!!!!*crys another river that is bigger then the mississippi river*
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Title: NOOOO!
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T___T oh god no... T_T that stupid girl...inuyasha is right she DOES jump to conclusions... he has to find her... cause if he has to wait 4-5 more years T__T oh god he'll leave her...she doesnt know what she's done... Dark_lady_69 princess__sweets16@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 03:59 EDT
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Uggh,just absolutely wonderful,Inuyasha lies to Kagome not maliciously but a lie none the less not knowing Super Bitch Melissa has just got his girl in a snit. I can see Kagome's mind working overtime now and I'll take a wild guess that she's going to believe what Melissa told her and end up doing something she's going to regret. Oiy, what a mess. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: July 23, 2007 02:01 EDT
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Oh boy, trouble never leaves Kagome does it? I really hope that Inuyasha catches on to Melissa's goading Kagome that Inuyasha is unfaithful. That girl has to be fired!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Chapter. Very Nice. I feel like I'm watching the anime in my mind. Keep up the terrific work. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 12:55 EDT
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Kagome and Inuyasha are so "Koi"(did I spell it right?)I'm so happy for them I just hope that Kagome doesn't let people change her mind about their relationship. Well,Well, Kiyoshi has met his match in Alexandra, can't wait to see how this'll turn out. So until next time, happy writing. P.S When will we get another lemon?
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Reviewed By: Mirror223333 On: July 20, 2007 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
STOP SKIPPING THE LEMONS WE WANT LIME AT THE VERY LEAST!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 23:31 EDT
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good chapter update... what will happen now... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 23:39 EDT
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Beyootiful! Never stop writing! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! I wuv it! The storyline is awesome! And I don't know how retarded the person was who said you pladerized. (did I spell that right?) I've read Purity, and I don't see where they got that idea. Continue on! Update soon!
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