| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: nicole chich On: August 21, 2006 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! i love this fic and i hope you will update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii chica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i read about the wish kagome made, i actually yelled at my computer screen sayin 'HOW STUPID CAN U BE!!!'. is Hogo that dense and stupid that he cant see the kagome isnt that into him or what?? well anyway this is an awsome story and cant wait till the next chapter.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter alot, Hojo is just dense isn't he. can't till next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Im_PHAT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 20:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
i love it
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! What it do? She'll remember!
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 22:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till the next chapter your story has a great start. Please update soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all, I think you have a really good start. You have a good bit of info in just the prologue alone. The story line/plot shows a good bit of promise as well. What all else will happen to the companions as they await Kagome, and should be interesting on how Inu will approach her when the time comes. I like it. I hope you're able to update soon, but if not, update when you can. :D
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