| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:35 EDT
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love chapter 21 i can't wait for 22,23 ect till the story ends
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 00:24 EDT
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really great and sweet chapter... liked it... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: Yo!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:41 EDT
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I love your story. But besides that could you chnge the name of Shiori to Souten because Souten had a crush on Shippo. You remember that little sister of The Thunder Brothers and if you don't or haven't watched that episode, could you still change the name.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 01:37 EDT
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I do so love this story. I wonder what's going to happen in Paris with the crazy bunch of them. Now really, what is Melissa doing snooping aroung in Inuyasha's office, I think she may be one of those people leaking info on him to the tabloids. I hope Ayumi doesn't drop her friendship with Akina over a boy, it's not worth it at all. Well hope to see another update soon.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 10, 2007 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xenon?! warroir princess LOL
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 10, 2007 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xenon?! warroir princess LOL
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: July 10, 2007 01:15 EDT
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The secretary isn't going to cause trouble is she? The limo meeting was way funny, can't wait ti see what happens in Paris.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 01:03 EDT
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great chapter update... getting good... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 23:11 EDT
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i just read your new chapter. omg i can't wait when they reach paris .i wounder whats in store for them all!!!! love your work .u got me to say you got me addicted!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 02:56 EDT
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omg i absolutly love your story i read the whole thing in one day i loved it so much it was hard to put it down but i had to surtin times of the day and i think your imagination took you away and swept me off my feet love your story,love your work, love you for posting this online.... thanks you made my day alot happier oh yeah hopfully you make more chapters :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:39 EDT
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great chapter updates... looking forward to your upcoming chapters... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: uni_youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 15:25 EDT
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I am just dying to find out what kind of talk InuYasha is going to have with Kagome's mother. And what is Aki thinking of doing. You got me wrapped around finger. Don't leave me hanging, come on. *begs*
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Reviewed By: youkai fetish On: July 03, 2007 00:05 EDT
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You almost worried me there with the addition of the new priestess. For a second I thought Inuyasha had given in to, ahem, temptation.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 14:24 EDT
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story is going great and really sweet... looking forward to your upcoming chapters... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: July 01, 2007 23:14 EDT
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I am so glad I decide to read this. It is so well written, and I love how their relationship developed.
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