| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... it's getting good... feel bad for inuyasha though... as for kagome i'm glad akina saw her and scolded her at the airport... i must agree that kagome is acting stupidly childish and is just becoming annoying... hope kagome just wakes up... won't blame inuyasha if his treatment towards kagome is quite cold and distant like sesshomaru... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo I'm gonna slap you with a wet noodle now!!! Bad cliffie! BAD! :) You're awesome.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost cried. all the emotions in the last few chapters in addition to the fact that i just noticed there were three new chapters since the last time i read this story! the characterization in the story is amazing. it's fascinating to see the characters mature and encounter such obstacles. keep up the good work1
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update! It's almost painful *wimper* to read Inu being hurt so by Kag and I'm afraid he will never be able to give himself completely to her again! :( Please don't keep us waiting long!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukai17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:51 EDT
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i agree with TERRIFIC. great story, but kagome is acting a little childish. to tell you the truth shes pissing me off a little cuz she knows that shes killing inuyasha by going with this vincent guy. her voice needs to knock her back into shape. again great story and im on edge waiting for the next chap. -_-o0O(you are killing me...) ... so write write write! XP
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Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my!!!!!!! You´re great, I didn´t imagine the man driving the car would be Inuyasha!!! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:01 EDT
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Still can't believe that our beloved Kagome hasn't sitted InuBaka yet! She has GOT to do that sometime XD I loved the story, it was amazing. Please update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I must know what happens to Inu-chan!
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Title: TERRIFIC
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What a wonderful chapter. But I HATE Cliffys! Need part 2 please. I must know what happens next!!! Poor Inuyasha. Kagome is acting very childish. I hope she wises up soon. Our favorite couple need to be with each other. Love this story. Keep it coming. Please update soon. Not sure how long I can wait for part 2!!! LOL WONDERFUL!
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:14 EDT
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Like i said before. Don't you DARE let Kagome actually get married to that guy! Inuyasha says he can't let her get close again but i know that he will anyways. Break up Kagome and that vincent guy immediately because i don't want to see him anymore!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this sounds bitchy but I wish Inuyasha could have hit Kagome with his car lol it's just that she's so... stupid! Why the heck doesn't she go back with Inuyasha?! She should remember that he had waited so long for her and she just runs away and is about to marry another man!!! Stupid Kagome... lol anyways, I loved the new updates and keep up that good work!!!
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Title: Volition
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, though I was upset when Kagome cut and run (even though she did need time on her own to grow up). I just want to see her deal with her running issues and get back to InuYasha. He makes my heart cry having to protect himself. It's Kikyo all over again. I hope you are going to do a flashback to what he did to the two witches (with a 'B') that set him up and how he took care of them. I hope they were destroyed.... Yes, I'm blood thirsty, the dirty little....@#%&*@@. hahaha Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I do enjoy it and am SOOOOOO happy when you update quickly. Rhonda
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating! Just finished ch 27-29 and WOW wasn't expecting all that time to have passed. I think I understand what you are doing though. Kagome needs to define herself not just as Inuyasha's soulmate but as someone with goals and a sense of self-worth. I think that is a part of her trust issues with Inu and why she so quickly jumps to the conclusion that he doesn't want her. So even tho it is hard to let that time go by I understand. What I would like to see is what her relationship with fer mother has been during that time. I understand mama telling Inu to give her daughter time when she first left but I can't see that going on for 6 years! Does Kags' family know of her impending marriage? Also, I think Inu would be in a lot more pain than he seems to be but we've only gotten a glimpse into what this time has been like for him. I'm sure that true love will win out but I'm worried what it will do to Kagome when she breaks it off with Vincent. As much as I want to hate him, he is really a great guy. He has waited for her and I think truly loves her. He is going to be really heartbroken and that will be hard on our miko. Can't wait to see the sparks fly when Inu & Kag finally meet again...I can't imagine the hanyou is going to let her off easy for leaving him twice! :) Love the story and please don't keep us in suspense too much longer!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukai17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
keh, great story. been waitin for the update all week so thanks for finally posting. you're killin me with the suspense and also, the names of your chars (the fake ones) are really startin to freak me out cuz i know ppl with all but like one of those names and their mannerisms and personality are eerily similar. thats besides the point though. keep up the good work. PS ive been reading the other chapters and there are some errors you might want to fix cuz it messes with the meaning (just a thought if you enter a contest with it).
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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nice chapter update... so kagome is going back to japan... it is long overdue... hope kagome sees inuyasha now next chapter... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay. Kagome is finally going back to Japan. Can't wait! Thanks for 3 chapters in one day! AWESOME!
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