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Title: Volition
Reviewed By: Volition-FAN! On: August 25, 2006 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, I absoluetly LOVE this story! It's so cute and funny and beautiful! You've certainly evolved as a writer from 'Twisted Love' to this! It's amazing! Upload as soon as you can...you've got me hooked girl. You've got serious talent!
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Title: Keep Going
Reviewed By: animelimited On: August 25, 2006 22:30 EDT
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I have been reading fan fiction for some years now but I have never left a review before. I never thought my opinion, good or bad, should influence anothers calling. Sharing a part of yourself with strangers can be intimidating at best. You have a sweet, romantic and funny story unfolding. Don't let someones groundless accusation bother you. I know I am looking forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Big Fan of Volition On: August 25, 2006 20:34 EDT
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*Does happy dance* I'm absolutely loving Kagome's little internal monologues...now if only she would just go through with them, specifically kicking Hojou in the balls.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 15:10 EDT
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This is a very good fic, and the plot is definitely not the same as Purity. It's really well done, and when will Kags remember?!?! Hmm, I am waiting eagerly for an update. (I want Hojo to get beaten and then he will go away and leave Inu and Kags to sweet fluff!) *Worships the fluff*
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 14:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this chapter What is hobo going to do to Kagome? I love the slip she gave him she should always listen to her intervoice. anyway keep up the great work. can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kawaii chica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 13:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this last chapter was great. i cant beleive it is taken kagome this long. i would have dumped hobo the moment i met inu. i think hobo should have a freak accident! something big so he ends up in the hospital as a vegetable!! cant wait for the next chap. update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: August 25, 2006 12:55 EDT
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I love the new chapter! hojo should get hit by traffic. =D
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 19:21 EDT
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this is awesome! ^^ good job! and please keep up the good work and updates!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: August 24, 2006 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to throw in my two cents worth. I read all of Sueric's work (great stuff!)and I do not get any impression of plagerism. I love Inu/Kag stories where one of them loses their memory. Every one is different and always interesting. Keep going! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: lovethisstory. On: August 24, 2006 14:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I so look forward until your next update.
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Reviewed By: A Big Fan of Volition On: August 24, 2006 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who accused you of plagiarizing said person's work? Sure, there are a few similarities, but with the overwhelming abundance of IY fanfics, it's impossible not to have some overlap of ideas. I don't believe you've done anything wrong and I'm sure all of your fans feel the same way. I just wanted to say, I love this story and the way you're developing the Inu/Kagome relationship. Though, Hojou needs a swift kick in the ass by our favorite hanyou! Anyways, good luck with your next update...I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: August 24, 2006 10:20 EDT
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i love it! besides in my opinion this is better than purity. so dont mind what some asshole said to you.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 07:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter it was great. Why is Kagome so wishy-washy with Hojo? Why don't she listen to her inter voice? I like how Inuyasha is winning her over ....again. Please update soon
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Title: THAT'S AMORE
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so kawii (did I spell it right?) Good way to make Inu run into Kagome, if he never had to go to work he would've missed her. I can't believe Hojo is such an ass but Kagome should really wise up. I liked the conversation Inu had in his head, I think we all talk to ourselves like that sometimes and he's right Kagome is his's. Looking forward to the next chapter maybe some lime hmmmmm.
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 01:21 EDT
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That was....... REALLY GREAT! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!! *Faints of sudden energy boost*
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